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There she sits, in such pure and innocent beauty She thinks feeding the ducks is her newest duty Her smile lights up the dark shadows on my heart Sad that her hearing is much worse than we thought Nothing is more fun to her than feeding those ducks A frown when one steals it all, she says, "Aw Shucks" She imagines she's their mom when they come near Quacking for attention, sounds she can hardly hear I saw one nip at her toes, thinking it was bread She pointed, giggled, and this is what she said, "Bad little duck! Don't bite your Mommy's toes." She pretended to be angry and struck a silly pose She's the perfect combination of angel and tomboy In her favorite overalls, she plays with her girly toys She loves those denims, would wear them every day when she sits on the wharf, feeding ducks on the bay ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ May 5th, 2016 Eve's Feeding the Ducks Contest

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Date: 7/17/2016 5:48:00 PM
LIN LANE, congratulations on your FEEDING THE DUCKY'S win. LUV **SKAT**
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Date: 7/11/2016 10:46:00 PM
Lovely poem Lin, enjoyed spending time with you tonight. Hope things are well with you.
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Date: 6/7/2016 9:30:00 AM
Very lovely well done congrats xxx
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Date: 6/1/2016 6:28:00 AM
What an amazing work Lin! I know you would win! Congratulations and keep on writing! :) -Hans
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Date: 5/31/2016 2:03:00 PM
Very charming Lin,congrats!
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Date: 5/31/2016 12:32:00 PM
A lovely and emotional poem that befits this inspiring picture, Lin...also a truly deserved winner. Congratulations! ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 5/31/2016 1:23:00 AM
Very cute picture you've painted here with your words:) sad to know that the little girl is deaf...Congratulations on your lovely placement:)
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Date: 5/31/2016 12:12:00 AM
Lin, congrats on your win.
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Date: 5/30/2016 6:05:00 PM
Such a lovely, sweet poem, Lin. I enjoyed your write. Congratulations on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 5/30/2016 5:16:00 PM
Lin, thank you so very much for creating a beautiful poem for the contest. Congratulations on your Win!!! Hugs Eve
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Date: 5/30/2016 4:46:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Lin so lovely to read this again:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 5/16/2016 9:04:00 PM
This was such a sweet little story with an endearing quality to it. Not only was the essence of the painting captured, but you've added greater depth to it, with the details of her being deaf ... being a piano player the thought of being deaf is a bit heart breaking to think about. This would be really cute in some sort of children's book methinks ... excellent job, Lin!
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Lin Lane
Date: 5/17/2016 1:27:00 AM
Thank you, Tim. I've been told that several of my poems should be published in a children's book. Now that I have a wee little grandchild, the idea appeals to me. I'm glad you like this one.
Date: 5/5/2016 10:06:00 PM
Lin, I think you captured the essence of the theme and painting beautifully. If I were judging, you just won...
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Date: 5/5/2016 10:32:00 PM
Thank you, Charlie. I'll claim my prize, which is your kind compliment!
Date: 5/5/2016 3:41:00 PM
Hearing people are more sad than any of the deaf at their loss because they don't dwell on what they are missing. My first husband was deaf and the father of two of my children and I interpret for the deaf. They embrace life in all senses in which they are blessed. Your poem exudes the joy of both the child and the ducks Lin, and was a delight go read this morning. I hope this is a top winner. I adored the picture too. #7 ; )
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Date: 5/5/2016 4:20:00 PM
Thank you for sharing your thoughts with me, Connie, and I agree with you. I've found that deaf and blind people are so much more sensitive. I'm glad you liked it so well. The painting was one that Eve supplied for her contest. It's not one of her beauties, but it sure is a realistic work of art.
Date: 5/5/2016 3:14:00 PM
LIn, I loved this. Sadly, it is only one of three memories I have my mother. The last at age 3 and half on Mother;s day when she left. Even the pic is reminiscent of my sister and my two brothers as we fed the ducks in the park, just before she gave us up, a life time ago. TY for the memory. DMB
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Date: 5/5/2016 4:17:00 PM
Oh, DM, I am so moved by your comment. Sorry that it evoked one of few memories, but glad it gave you a moment to reminisce. I'm so sorry about your childhood circumstances, but thank you for sharing it with me. You need a hug ((( DMB )))
Date: 5/5/2016 2:05:00 PM
Oh Lin this brought a lump to my throat - such an emotional write with wonderful imagery:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 5/5/2016 4:13:00 PM
You're soft-hearted, Jan...one of the things I like best about you. Thank you.
Date: 5/5/2016 1:39:00 PM
Very cute Lin...I really enjoyed this write
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Date: 5/5/2016 4:12:00 PM
Thanks very much, Tim.
Date: 5/5/2016 12:56:00 PM
Sweet write...enjoyed. BG
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Date: 5/5/2016 1:32:00 PM
Thank you, Barbara.
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Date: 5/5/2016 12:56:00 PM
oops...BG

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