She Loves Me

I adore mornings.
That first kiss.
Hot breath on my face.

The warmth of her tongue
as it explores my ear,
urging me to rise -
and engage the day;

I *love that dog ...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Lindsay Avatar
August 3, 2015 at 3:32 AM
I won? Wow - that's the first time I've been chosen for something since that infamous Police lineup ... ;)
A. Sharma Avatar
August 2, 2015 at 10:52 PM
Superb write Bill that's worthy of great win! Big congrats!
Rodgers Avatar
August 2, 2015 at 8:24 PM
Doggone had me going there. Congrats on yuor win.
Inman Avatar
August 2, 2015 at 6:00 PM
Nice twist! Love it.
Allison Avatar
August 2, 2015 at 4:48 PM
ha ha love the twist:-) many congrats:-) hugs jan xx
A  Avatar
August 2, 2015 at 4:06 PM
Bill, Congrats. SK
Alltraine Avatar
August 2, 2015 at 3:25 AM
haha, good twist. :)
Deremer Avatar
July 30, 2015 at 4:46 PM
What a surprise ending! Very good!
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