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She Looks Good/ She Looks Fine

Here she comes Walking down the street What's she wearing Looking so neat Lime green shirt Really a treat Black dress pants The style she tweeks Pride walking Through the door Keeps her stride Even more She looks good She looks fine Best in the neighborhood What's that at her feet A dog on a lease He looks good He looks fine He finest kind Prancing, dancing Does many feats Taunt goes the lease He's running on those feet The lease go taunt Dog snatches She suffers defeat She looks daunt The dog pulls, tugs The lady lugs She runs, he looks Behind Come on your mine She looks daunted She looks haunted Who is walking who The lady in lime green Or the Chihuahua Who thinks he can Boss the whole neighborhood (Saw a woman walking a chihuahua probably weighed 3 lbs. except he was walking her. Thought of a song from long ago "There she comes walking down the street" don't remember title or artist but thought I need to give credit here.)

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Date: 8/23/2009 8:39:00 AM
She looks good,she looks fine, and she writes so well she blows my mind. You get on with yourself now girl. Loved every bit of it. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/23/2009 5:58:00 AM
Interesting Sara, Doo Waah Diddy, Diddy Dum, Diddy Doo!!! as William wrote and it was by Manfred Mann, from the sixties>>James
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Date: 8/22/2009 5:34:00 PM
interesting
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Date: 8/22/2009 3:15:00 PM
Doo Waah Diddy, Diddy Dum, Diddy Doo!!! Fun run on a pre-end of summer weekend.Thanks. Love, Will
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Date: 8/22/2009 2:18:00 PM
Sara, quite a treat from you, very witty, and brilliant rhyme, Sincerely Moses
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