She Looks Good/ She Looks Fine

Here she comes 
Walking down the street
What's she wearing
Looking so neat

Lime green shirt 
Really  a treat
Black dress pants
The style she tweeks

Pride walking 
Through the door
Keeps her stride
Even more

She looks good
She looks fine
Best in the neighborhood
What's that at her feet

A dog on a lease
He looks good
He looks fine
He finest kind

Prancing, dancing
Does many feats
Taunt goes the lease
He's running on those feet

The lease go taunt
Dog snatches
She suffers defeat
She looks daunt

The dog pulls, tugs
The lady lugs
She runs, he looks
Behind 

Come on your mine
She looks daunted
She looks haunted
Who is walking who

The lady in lime green
Or the Chihuahua
Who thinks he can
Boss the whole neighborhood


(Saw a woman walking a chihuahua probably weighed 3 lbs. except he was walking her.  
Thought of a song from long ago "There she comes walking down the street"  don't 
remember title or artist but thought I need to give credit here.)
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Brown Avatar
August 23, 2009 at 8:39 AM
She looks good,she looks fine, and she writes so well she blows my mind. You get on with yourself now girl. Loved every bit of it. Love, Carol
Fraser Avatar
August 23, 2009 at 5:58 AM
Interesting Sara, Doo Waah Diddy, Diddy Dum, Diddy Doo!!! as William wrote and it was by Manfred Mann, from the sixties>>James
Culverhouse Avatar
August 22, 2009 at 5:34 PM
interesting
Kershaw Avatar
August 22, 2009 at 3:15 PM
Doo Waah Diddy, Diddy Dum, Diddy Doo!!! Fun run on a pre-end of summer weekend.Thanks. Love, Will
Freeman Avatar
August 22, 2009 at 2:18 PM
Sara, quite a treat from you, very witty, and brilliant rhyme, Sincerely Moses
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