She Looked At Me

It is National Happy Cat Month (September). Please consider adoption. Cat: An incomparable companion that smoothes the bumpy road.
She looked at me with somber eyes enchanting with her wily guise. Hesitant love became her stance as she wondered at her sole chance by blinking lovely golden eyes. Living life with abuse and lies never knowing what love implies cautiously observing askance, she looked at me. Asking only for warm allies and love that her bearing belies hopeful that this is no mischance and she may enrich and enhance my cheerless life with loving ties she looked at me.
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Hind Avatar
September 19, 2025 at 4:43 PM
Very beautiful refrain- deep on the eyes, <3
Fowler Avatar
September 22, 2025 at 1:10 PM
Thanks Paige! :)
Rodrigues Avatar
September 7, 2025 at 7:54 PM
Some beautiful writing I’ve read from you today!
Fowler Avatar
September 8, 2025 at 6:36 AM
Thanks so much Kim. I appreciate your supportive and encouraging comments! :)
Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 1, 2025 at 4:42 PM
outstanding poem honoring Happy Cat Month. Nice job with the Rondeau form...you've inspired me to give it a try...have a great evening, Sara
Fowler Avatar
September 4, 2025 at 9:01 AM
Hi Sara. Thank you for noticing the Rondeau form. I enjoy writing it although it can be a little tricky with the transition to the repeating line. I keep trying! You should give it a try! :)
Goldsmith Avatar
September 1, 2025 at 1:30 PM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful "She Looked At Me" write. Thanks for your note and quote. Did not know about Sept and Cats. Great memories are the best kind to have. I had cats as a child but none now. They were fun as I dressed them in my doll clothes. Have a blessed day writing away.............
Fowler Avatar
September 4, 2025 at 8:59 AM
So glad you enjoyed cats as a child. We had many pets: dogs, cats, rabbits, ducks, parakeets, skunks and pigs. I loved them all!! Thank you dear Paula! :)
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 1, 2025 at 11:39 AM
Hello Linda Flower, It sounds like to me, that your cat had a hard life before meeting you. You will fill her heart with love and trust. because that is what she needs. Hugs. /Darlene/
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 4, 2025 at 10:46 AM
Hello Linda, You are welcome. Hugs. /Darlene/
Fowler Avatar
September 4, 2025 at 8:58 AM
Your are so kind my friend. Thank you, Darlene, for the sweet review. :)
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