She Listened To His Whisper

she listened to his whisper


he was so chipper
she listened to his whisper
their desires finally met
she only wanted to dip her feet wet
it was just so right
for that first night
just only her feet
getting royaly treated
he wasn't going anywhere
so he had all the time to spare
... this was love
two graying doves
         the next time
         it was a different rhyme
         this time the water touched her knees
         she began to panic and freeze
         it was nothing to be alarmed
         again he said, no foul no harm
         he gave her ample space
         free to be on her own terms, and pace
the next time
it was a totally different rhyme
water inched higher past her thighs
she began to scream and capsize
her eyes began to roll 
as the water took it's toll
his romantic aroma
sent her off into a coma
it was nothing to be alarmed
again he said, no foul no harm
he let her graze
to her own leisure
he lead his deer
without any fear 
          as the water inched passed her naval
          his horses came out of their stable
          wild eyed and looking for oats
          nudging it's way to her moat
          it was nothing to be alarmed
          again he said, no foul no harm
          this time she let him graze
          to his own leisure 
then as his ... horses began to explore
she let out a loud roar
her less traveled pasture
so fully enraptured
feeling his mind boggling heat
her heart skipping a thousand beats
         their minds singing a song
         as both horse backed along
         his reins on her train
         her train on his mane
         steadily on verse
         to both's thundering cloudburst
the tale of dipping her feet 
once so sweet
taking small steps
to higher water depths
her feet
lit the street
lit the spark in their day
to more replay 
lit their candle
for all that love can handle
for in their engraved hearts
to death do they part

connie pachecho

1/2/17

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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