She Knows Me

Tall trees and winter’s dismay
Empty hearts and cattle calls
Trusting no one save you and 
Scattered love on forgotten walls

I love the way her lips
Curl when she tells a lie
A secret agreement between lovers
I promise and she cries

I think I do

I know she does

Killer’s eyes greet the morning
Lusty moans and sweaty brows
The thin line threatens to break
It’s far too late now

Rapture unforgiving as the night
Jumbled in a mixture of cement and love
The city is unforgiving
Love is as lust does

I know it now

But dare not speak

This is bigger than me
Cataclysms and tumbling virtue
A heartless fool I would be
If this lie is true
She has me now
What can I do?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 1/29/2011 10:25:00 AM
You are a gifted painter of words and although I've never commented I have you saved as one of my favorites. I appreciate your talent.
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Date: 9/28/2010 1:29:00 PM
excellent, lol,, the ending is funny,..p.d.
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Date: 11/13/2008 12:26:00 AM
Your lines reflect my inner thoughts and conflicting emotions...Brilliant..
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Date: 9/6/2008 8:07:00 AM
Wow. So much here. Love the line "Love is as lust does". A complicated write (to this reader) that sends my imagination soaring. Love your poetry. Love, Shar
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Date: 8/27/2008 2:07:00 AM
another skillfully written , well crafted poem from you. lovely poem ..well done bradley
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