She Is My Shangri La

 
“Know, oh prince, that between the years when the oceans drank Atlantis and the gleaming cities, and the years of the rise of the Sons of Aryas, there was an Age undreamed of, when shining kingdoms lay spread across the world like blue mantles beneath the stars.” ? Robert E. Howard, The Complete Chronicles of Conan At times when stressed I take myself a walk beside the sea I step into a ‘dreamlike’ world where I’m the only one ~ just me The sea she feeds me energy and lifts my spirits high Her power is phenomenal So on this ‘hazy’ summer’s day a sea fret doth approach ‘Shadowy’ mists surrounding me I cannot see it feels ‘unreal’ But wait I hear a distant voice calling out my name an ephemeral transient tone hath she ‘tis beginning to feel ‘surreal’ As she beckons me towards the sea this mermaid is she ‘imaginary’ I am drawn to her ~ I feel ‘trancelike’ her golden aura ‘ethereal’ as she takes my hand we cross the sand and slowly descend to a place I call friend it’s Atlantis my spiritual home a place I know a place I go inside my head when filled with dread It calms my soul It stills my heart Without her there is no escape When all around no love just hate She comforts me and keeps me sane and welcomes me home time and again Atlantis is my Shangri La A magical mythical land afar Beneath the sea I yearn to be I’m Pisces ~ dreamy ~ spiritual ~ you see I return to the sea when she beckons me… Written 24 May 2021 Contest Writing Prompt – Dreamlike Sponsor - Constance La France FIRST PLACE
Contest ALL YOURS (Jun 5) Sponsor Brian Strand

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Date: 6/3/2021 12:51:00 PM
Ann - Congratulations on your win! A lovely poem - the last two lines, just perfect. "I’m Pisces ~ dreamy ~ spiritual ~ you see I return to the sea when she beckons me…" David
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 6/6/2021 5:36:00 AM
Thank you so much David for your congratulations and lovely comments. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 6/3/2021 10:44:00 AM
Lovely scene that beckons us to walk with you Ann! Congratulations on your win!
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 6/6/2021 5:35:00 AM
Please join me dearest Sam it would be oh so lovely... with kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 6/3/2021 9:05:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A beautiful story/write. What an ending, "I’m Pisces ~ dreamy ~ spiritual ~ you see I return to the sea when she beckons me…" Love It. Have a blessed day......................
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 6/6/2021 5:04:00 AM
Bless you dear Paula for your lovely comments. I really enjoyed writing it. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 6/2/2021 10:32:00 PM
Ann, great story and imagery. Congratulations on your win. Enjoyed reading. My warmest wishes. God bless you. <3
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 6/6/2021 5:02:00 AM
So pleased you enjoyed reading my poem Eve and thanks for your lovely comments. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 6/2/2021 2:32:00 PM
Ann, beautiful and congratulations on your win in my Writing Prompt - Dreamlike - Challenge, I like the quote too, love - Constance
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 6/6/2021 4:59:00 AM
Thank you so much dear Constance for my win in your fabulous contest, I really enjoyed the challenge and thanks for all the time you give sponsoring judging these contests. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 6/2/2021 12:03:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! It's a magical piece - very dreamlike! Love and BW ~ Mala
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Date: 6/6/2021 4:55:00 AM
Bless you dear Malabika and thank you for your beautiful comments my friend. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 6/2/2021 11:50:00 AM
Great Indeed. Congratulations!
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Date: 6/6/2021 4:54:00 AM
Thank you so much Christuraj for your lovely comments. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 5/24/2021 3:25:00 PM
Wow ~ absolutely beautiful, Ann
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Date: 5/24/2021 10:41:00 PM
bless you dear Line and thanks for your wonderful comment my friend... xx
Date: 5/24/2021 12:37:00 PM
Lovely story so full of imagery. Best for a win.
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Date: 5/24/2021 1:11:00 PM
Bless you dear Victor and thanks for your kind words. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 5/24/2021 10:31:00 AM
Love the imagery of a beach walk Ann, so soothing and your mind drifts off to the realms of fantasy, Atlantis. Well written and good luck in the contest. Tom
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Date: 5/24/2021 11:04:00 AM
Many thanks Tom, yes the sea really soothes me and when I'm away from her I yearn to return... hoping you are well and getting some sunshine between the showers! It has been very windy here, but at least it blows those rain clouds away, haha... with kindest thoughts Ann xx
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