She Is Like-

She is like a black rose
Standing amongst other inferior ones
Blushing to and fro with gushes
On an exquisite morning…

She is like a blooming moon 
Cynosure of every one's eye 
Shedding its milky ness on the forehead of sky
Shining on a dingy dark night…

She is like a curling stream
To which every one rushes
Flowing with esteem and passion
Alone in the green vale…

She is like blood in vein 
Which keeps the life running
In the body of an individual
Giving warmth to body…

She is like a cool breeze
Blowing on a white day 
Irrespective of the object 'n' individual
Charming with its fragrance…
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008
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Richards Avatar
December 14, 2008 at 11:31 AM
What a lovely written romantic poem. Oh my it's irresistable! Well deserved to be featured this week! ~ Carrie
Augustus Avatar
December 13, 2008 at 10:23 AM
Love, love, love this poem! So romantic and loving! Whatever woman is in your life she can be truly blessed with these words! Awesome!
Winter Avatar
December 9, 2008 at 5:48 PM
Congrats on your featured write! Happy holidays! Love, Shar
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December 8, 2008 at 8:00 PM
Congrats Saif on "She Is Like..." being featured this week. Vince
George   Avatar
December 8, 2008 at 1:12 PM
She is beautiful! You have painted her in all her glory with your beautiful words, dear Saif. lainie
Heck Avatar
December 7, 2008 at 4:58 PM
Saif - Congratulations on your featured poem this week! Wishing you and yours a Happy Holiday season. Peace always, John
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December 7, 2008 at 3:55 PM
Saif, I really appreciate the intensity you have injected into this poem for your readers to grasp. Congratulations for being featured... MPK
Richards Avatar
December 7, 2008 at 3:15 PM
Great descriptions in this poem! Congratulations on this being featured this week! ~ Carrie
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December 7, 2008 at 2:33 PM
Interesting use of imagery. Much for the reader to ponder. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
B Raju Avatar
August 30, 2008 at 1:58 AM
'She is like a blooming moon', what a lovely and novel idea....
Spence Sr Avatar
August 28, 2008 at 9:32 PM
This is an excellent write. I like the descriptiveness of the piece. Great job and welcome to PoetrySoup! ~Joseph
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