Home » Poems » Liam Mcdaid » She Grasps the Heart Sweetly

She Grasps the Heart Sweetly

I am running away eloping with you sweet love inside the mind Silently breathing ore sighs A golden whisper blowing honey melting treasure treats softly in the wind silent warm Blowing on precious pure beauty Touching petal feelings fluttering without wings sweet carrying emotions from the soul Dancing within music one song forever Glowing warmly desires sings gentle satin drumbeats in a cotton echoing harmony Always chocolate kissing nibbles In every single thought that whispers love endearing each heartbeat skipping gasps Sweetly grasps the soul warming echoing sighs deeply loving you

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Sandip Goswami

Date: 11/22/2014 2:21:00 PM

I believe that every great mind speeches great words...It is proved by you...Thank you very much...

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/25/2014 9:12:00 AM

sandip heart touching wonderful comment thanks dear friend bless you

Arthur Vaso

Date: 11/21/2014 11:31:00 PM

This is so good I may borrow a few lines at the pub!!!! :)

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/23/2014 6:11:00 PM

ha ha arthur made me smile someone might kidnap you lol wonderful comment thank you pal deeply appreciated

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/21/2014 3:23:00 PM

Dear Liam, you have a beautiful, romantic heart and it comes through so well in this poem. There are many special lines and my favorite is the image created by "fluttering without wings." I've always wished I could fly and somehow this makes me feel like I can. Bless you for sharing, Carolyn

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/21/2014 3:33:00 PM

carolyn your so sweet dear friend wonderful comment i wrote this from the heart thank you deeply bless you dear friend

Eileen Manassian

Date: 11/21/2014 10:53:00 AM

My friend, your poetry is always a treat to read. :)

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/21/2014 11:27:00 AM

thank you ever so much eileen so kind bless you pal

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 11/21/2014 9:06:00 AM

Flowing with sweet, romantic sentiment...beautiful words as always, Liam! Have a beautiful weekend...hugs, Rhonda

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/21/2014 11:25:00 AM

truly heartfelt beautiful comment rhonda thank you kindly you have a wonderful evening dear friend

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 11/21/2014 9:05:00 AM

This is a very beautiful love poem my dear friend Liam. So very sweet, romantic and tender. I enjoyed reading it. You got such a wonderful and natural way with words, Liam. A 7 for me! God bless you always and have a great weekend! :) Love and hugs! xxx D.

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/21/2014 11:20:00 AM

thank you dorian so sweet your comment smiling dear friend heartfelt appreciated bless you

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/21/2014 8:33:00 AM

- Yes, I'm right !!!!! : Romance is your first name !!! - A beautiful and romantic poem my friend Liam - I wish you a lovely weekend - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/21/2014 11:18:00 AM

yes pure delighted smiling for you we must do another real soon we write excellent together

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/21/2014 8:43:00 AM

- Have you read "the day poem" :)))

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/21/2014 8:39:00 AM

really got me smiling thank you deeply anne lise bless you for the wonderful comment dear friend you also have a deadly weekend