She Grasps the Heart Sweetly

I am running away eloping
with you sweet love  
inside the mind 
Silently breathing ore sighs 
 
A golden whisper blowing honey
melting treasure treats
softly in the wind silent warm
Blowing on precious pure beauty

Touching petal feelings 
fluttering without wings
sweet carrying emotions from the soul
Dancing within music one song forever

Glowing warmly desires 
sings gentle satin drumbeats
in a cotton echoing harmony
Always chocolate kissing nibbles 

In every single thought that whispers
love endearing each heartbeat
skipping gasps 
Sweetly grasps the soul
warming  echoing sighs deeply loving you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Goswami Avatar
November 22, 2014 at 2:21 PM
I believe that every great mind speeches great words...It is proved by you...Thank you very much...
Mcdaid Avatar
November 25, 2014 at 9:12 AM
sandip heart touching wonderful comment thanks dear friend bless you
Vaso Avatar
November 21, 2014 at 11:31 PM
This is so good I may borrow a few lines at the pub!!!! :)
Mcdaid Avatar
November 23, 2014 at 6:11 PM
ha ha arthur made me smile someone might kidnap you lol wonderful comment thank you pal deeply appreciated
Devonshire Avatar
November 21, 2014 at 3:23 PM
Dear Liam, you have a beautiful, romantic heart and it comes through so well in this poem. There are many special lines and my favorite is the image created by "fluttering without wings." I've always wished I could fly and somehow this makes me feel like I can. Bless you for sharing, Carolyn
Mcdaid Avatar
November 21, 2014 at 3:33 PM
carolyn your so sweet dear friend wonderful comment i wrote this from the heart thank you deeply bless you dear friend
Manassian Avatar
November 21, 2014 at 10:53 AM
My friend, your poetry is always a treat to read. :)
Mcdaid Avatar
November 21, 2014 at 11:27 AM
thank you ever so much eileen so kind bless you pal
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
November 21, 2014 at 9:06 AM
Flowing with sweet, romantic sentiment...beautiful words as always, Liam! Have a beautiful weekend...hugs, Rhonda
Mcdaid Avatar
November 21, 2014 at 11:25 AM
truly heartfelt beautiful comment rhonda thank you kindly you have a wonderful evening dear friend
Petersen Potter Avatar
November 21, 2014 at 9:05 AM
This is a very beautiful love poem my dear friend Liam. So very sweet, romantic and tender. I enjoyed reading it. You got such a wonderful and natural way with words, Liam. A 7 for me! God bless you always and have a great weekend! :) Love and hugs! xxx D.
Mcdaid Avatar
November 21, 2014 at 11:20 AM
thank you dorian so sweet your comment smiling dear friend heartfelt appreciated bless you
Andresen Avatar
November 21, 2014 at 8:33 AM
- Yes, I'm right !!!!! : Romance is your first name !!! - A beautiful and romantic poem my friend Liam - I wish you a lovely weekend - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Mcdaid Avatar
November 21, 2014 at 11:18 AM
yes pure delighted smiling for you we must do another real soon we write excellent together
Andresen Avatar
November 21, 2014 at 8:43 AM
- Have you read "the day poem" :)))
Mcdaid Avatar
November 21, 2014 at 8:39 AM
really got me smiling thank you deeply anne lise bless you for the wonderful comment dear friend you also have a deadly weekend
Chircop Avatar
November 21, 2014 at 7:26 AM
Beautiful this is -Charma
Mcdaid Avatar
November 21, 2014 at 8:00 AM
thank you charmaine for the very beautiful comment bless you pal
Allison Avatar
November 21, 2014 at 6:05 AM
so beautifully penned my friend - yet another gem from your pen:-) hugs jan xx
Mcdaid Avatar
November 21, 2014 at 6:44 AM
thank you jan for your kind very beautiful comment dear friend bless you
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