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She Fumes With Chameleon's Grace

Like chameleon hiding growls in chains She fumes in defiance, such stubborn will; A raging fire about Vie I can’t explain Mocking fate when stars bind her daunting spills. Oh woman, your patience bears heavy weight Brisk moments clamor for rest longing in vain, This hunger for answers race, time rings late Or can fate wander just to stake its claim? Your ferocious rambling will lay you bare; With heart’s restless desires, a solar flare. Yet, this essence turns into warm passion, As you tenderly flush my fears at night To hold the moon blue and slay my dragons; While soft petunias in your arms delight Cleansing petal tears with flames of love’s depth, And wings spread on hope’s ride beaming in grace Vienna- light speeds to fill gasps of withered breaths; Till smiles peal and comfort this my dreary face. For your phoenix rises from the ocean’s rolls Each sky, each blade of grass healing my soul! ‘ ‘’’’’’’’’ ‘ ‘’ Vienna’s Contest: Let Me Have It then Kiss My Petunia by nette onclaud

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/5/2012 5:21:00 PM
Wonderful and well written piece,Nette....Congratulations on your super win in this contest..
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Date: 10/5/2012 8:18:00 AM
NETTE, congratulations in Vienna Bombardieri "Let me have it then kiss my petunia" INTERESTING contest... TAKE CARE :-) Love PD
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Date: 10/5/2012 5:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Vienna's contest Nette. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/5/2012 4:20:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful first place win Nette!
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Date: 10/4/2012 9:51:00 PM
Nicely written. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 9/18/2012 8:57:00 AM
lovely write indeed, Nette - congrats on all your wins : )
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Date: 9/18/2012 5:08:00 AM
Excellent. Well crafted poem. Enjoyed. tfs
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Date: 9/17/2012 5:32:00 PM
Interesting work that you have penned..Good luck in Vie's contest..Winner for sure..Thanks for stopping by my work, reading, and taking time to comment..Sara
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Date: 9/17/2012 3:59:00 PM
I guess you gave it to her there Nette...then you turn around and kiss her petunias. Best wishes in the contest. One love. Joy Wells
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Date: 9/17/2012 3:26:00 PM
You gracefully told her!! Love the idea of calling her a solar flare...how unpredictable is that?...enjoyed fully! Go win that contest, Nette! :)
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Date: 9/17/2012 2:39:00 PM
hi wonderful Nette, you really kissed it with this one.. Vie will love it.. i love the healing ending.. always~ PD
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Date: 9/17/2012 1:56:00 PM
You nailed it, exactly what Vie was looking for in the contest! I really enjoyed this cleverly written poem! What a fabulous and exceptional write! I love the chameleon changing into flames of love! This is a poem of great powers, a sentimental and charming piece! Fantastic write, Great Work!!
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Date: 9/17/2012 1:48:00 PM
No I'm just traveled ... back in 13 days. :) Luck in contest Nette - Beautiful poem. - Have a nice afternoon. oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/17/2012 11:59:00 AM
Just awesome Nette!!Beautiful poem on the theme of the contest!Best wishes.
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Date: 9/17/2012 11:57:00 AM
Yes!!!
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