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She Falls In Love

I am proud And feel I am upon a cloud Because of my womanhood As I have found you Who almost always Makes me feel so good From your turquoise ocean I gather my scented conversation From your blue sea All my sincerity From your little handsome suns Of brilliance Are inspired my hair buns From the sharpness of your quest Are born and spread The tiny mutinies In my breasts My all happiness Find their crystals Their waterfalls From the sweetness Your smile exudes Embracing the light and darkness in me Both sadness and glee My gestures lovely My habits ugly Unconditionally Now that you reappear On my orange spheres Please come back dear Let me fall in love From below and above From right and left From clouds in cleft Let's be together Into the tendrils we share The filigree of love In crimson curves Let's stuff our love In this fall Shadows grow tall And deeper too On my ridges On our bridges In my sleep your tulip-dream In my impatient stream Your swimming fingers In a deep pink thrill I have to take off All my grills My roses are for your eyes My purple finches your intense stimuli My ships for your lips My nest for your sparrows Your fireflies around my nest Your soft words from your taste Setting free Sounds of sea From my mouth Spoonbills soar North and south Let's make the rhymings Come along You do it Whatever you like Strike in delight Whether right or wrong Let spring songs come out Sprouts too I do seek In the lip and cheek Now In the moonlight In the Minoan moonlight Stand the horses One of them Sleek and dark brown Raise its hoof in air Inquiringly I look for you The moon grows dim A raw smell of fresh hay And the slush In moss and marsh And the smell of horses Earthy and harsh Come Be in love we must ___________________________ 13 September 2017 For the contest HELP ME FALL IN LOVE Hosted by Mystic Rose

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Date: 9/15/2017 6:06:00 AM
Congrats Probir!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 9/15/2017 12:43:00 PM
Thank you ...
Date: 9/14/2017 9:05:00 PM
Excellent write, Probir, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Probir Gupta
Date: 9/14/2017 9:41:00 PM
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Date: 9/14/2017 9:02:00 PM
Probir, an exquisite write of magical and romantic imagery beautifully worded and gracefully rhythmic and lush. An absolute joy for me to read this evening. Congratulations on your third place win!
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Susan Ashley
Date: 9/15/2017 5:54:00 PM
I think your work is brilliant Probir. If I may ask, why would you want criticism from me..?
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Probir Gupta
Date: 9/14/2017 9:43:00 PM
Thank you ... From you I would love to have criticism as well ...
Date: 9/14/2017 7:55:00 PM
Gorgeous write, my friend - whimsical and romantic, with thoughtful intent ... blessings and congrats on your win, Probir! :-)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 9/14/2017 9:48:00 PM
Aw ... This is indeed delightful ... Your poetry I value highly ... Thank you, dear friend ...
Date: 9/14/2017 6:36:00 PM
It's like when you see the champagne flow from the top tier downwards at fancy weddings. A gurgling delight Probir.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 9/14/2017 10:01:00 PM
At the moment I am gurgling for my sore throat though // in your flow of champagne I would still like to row! ... Thank you so much ...
Date: 9/14/2017 4:47:00 PM
My dearest friend, Probir, it seems that your poetry, like the good wine, gets better and better with the passing of time! Good luck my friend although I believe you do not need it here!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 9/14/2017 10:09:00 PM
I always need this, especially from friends like you ... Thank you ...
Date: 9/13/2017 10:28:00 AM
Wonderful friend Probir, congratulations ahead of time...
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Probir Gupta
Date: 9/14/2017 10:12:00 PM
So farsighted you are! ... Great ! ... Thank you ...
Date: 9/13/2017 9:45:00 AM
Probir, this is filled with pure loveliness. A distinct and superb poetic delight!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 9/14/2017 10:20:00 PM
When you like a poem, I am sure its readability quotient is good ... Thank you, Kim ...
Date: 9/13/2017 5:54:00 AM
Lovely poem Probir--good luck for the contest!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 9/14/2017 10:21:00 PM
Thank you, Vijay ...

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