She Falls In Love

I am proud
And feel I am upon a cloud
Because of my womanhood
As I have found you
Who almost always
Makes me feel so good

From your turquoise ocean
I gather my scented conversation
From your blue sea
All my sincerity
From your little handsome suns
Of brilliance
Are inspired my hair buns
From the sharpness of your quest
Are born and spread
The tiny mutinies
In my breasts

My all happiness
Find their crystals
Their waterfalls
From the sweetness
Your smile exudes
Embracing the light and darkness in me
Both sadness and glee
My gestures lovely
My habits ugly
Unconditionally

Now that you reappear
On my orange spheres
Please come back dear
Let me fall in love
From below and above
From right and left
From clouds in cleft
Let's be together
Into the tendrils we share
The filigree of love
In crimson curves
Let's stuff our love

In this fall
Shadows grow tall 
And deeper too
On my ridges
On our bridges
In my sleep your tulip-dream
In my impatient stream
Your swimming fingers
In a  deep pink thrill
I have to take off
All my grills

My roses are for your eyes
My purple finches your intense stimuli
My ships for your lips
My nest for your sparrows
Your fireflies around my nest
Your soft words from your taste
Setting free 
Sounds of sea
From my mouth
Spoonbills soar
North and south

Let's make the rhymings
Come along
You do it
Whatever you like
Strike in delight
Whether right or wrong
Let spring songs come out
Sprouts too I do seek
In the lip and cheek

Now
In the moonlight
In the Minoan moonlight
Stand the horses
One of them
Sleek and dark brown
Raise its hoof in air
Inquiringly I look for you
The moon grows dim
A raw smell of fresh hay
And the slush
In moss and marsh
And the smell of horses 
Earthy and harsh

Come
Be in love we must
___________________________
13 September 2017
For the contest HELP ME FALL IN LOVE
Hosted by Mystic Rose
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Pandit Avatar
September 15, 2017 at 6:06 AM
Congrats Probir!
Gupta Avatar
September 15, 2017 at 12:43 PM
Thank you ...
Roper Avatar
September 14, 2017 at 9:05 PM
Excellent write, Probir, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve ~`*
Gupta Avatar
September 14, 2017 at 9:41 PM
Thank you ...
Ashley Avatar
September 14, 2017 at 9:02 PM
Probir, an exquisite write of magical and romantic imagery beautifully worded and gracefully rhythmic and lush. An absolute joy for me to read this evening. Congratulations on your third place win!
Ashley Avatar
September 15, 2017 at 5:54 PM
I think your work is brilliant Probir. If I may ask, why would you want criticism from me..?
Gupta Avatar
September 14, 2017 at 9:43 PM
Thank you ... From you I would love to have criticism as well ...
Barden Avatar
September 14, 2017 at 7:55 PM
Gorgeous write, my friend - whimsical and romantic, with thoughtful intent ... blessings and congrats on your win, Probir! :-)
Gupta Avatar
September 14, 2017 at 9:48 PM
Aw ... This is indeed delightful ... Your poetry I value highly ... Thank you, dear friend ...
Murray Avatar
September 14, 2017 at 6:36 PM
It's like when you see the champagne flow from the top tier downwards at fancy weddings. A gurgling delight Probir.
Gupta Avatar
September 14, 2017 at 10:01 PM
At the moment I am gurgling for my sore throat though // in your flow of champagne I would still like to row! ... Thank you so much ...
Trifiatis Avatar
September 14, 2017 at 4:47 PM
My dearest friend, Probir, it seems that your poetry, like the good wine, gets better and better with the passing of time! Good luck my friend although I believe you do not need it here!
Gupta Avatar
September 14, 2017 at 10:09 PM
I always need this, especially from friends like you ... Thank you ...
Smith Avatar
September 13, 2017 at 10:28 AM
Wonderful friend Probir, congratulations ahead of time...
Gupta Avatar
September 14, 2017 at 10:12 PM
So farsighted you are! ... Great ! ... Thank you ...
Rodrigues Avatar
September 13, 2017 at 9:45 AM
Probir, this is filled with pure loveliness. A distinct and superb poetic delight!
Gupta Avatar
September 14, 2017 at 10:20 PM
When you like a poem, I am sure its readability quotient is good ... Thank you, Kim ...
Pandit Avatar
September 13, 2017 at 5:54 AM
Lovely poem Probir--good luck for the contest!
Gupta Avatar
September 14, 2017 at 10:21 PM
Thank you, Vijay ...
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace