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She Falls In Love

To tiptoe through the aqua of his eyes and feel unmoving waters in his gaze. I watch his lashes lilting with my sighs, and know their umber fills my glowing days. Then as each second of my breathing flies I'll feel his kisses through an amber haze; when Summer dies and darkens to the Fall I'll know his love's the greatest gift of all. His lips upon my neck do colors bring, their touch upon my skin lifts me to thrall; in Fall his love still means eternal Spring. As shades now darken to cold season's call, chartreuse and coral does new Autumn sing as though a blissful Summer cannot stall. He helped me fall in love despite my sins; from here the story of my life begins.

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Date: 9/20/2017 8:37:00 PM
Very loving words. So well written.
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Date: 9/15/2017 6:08:00 AM
Congrats Dale!
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Date: 9/14/2017 8:05:00 PM
What a wonderful Ottava Rima, David - gorgeous and romantic write, enjoyed this very much! Blessings and congrats on your win, my friend! :-)
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Date: 9/13/2017 1:42:00 PM
Very colorful. Beautifully written Dale! Good Luck with this entry!
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Date: 9/13/2017 12:16:00 PM
Yours is a lovely poem along with a message too ... Good luck ... Thanks for liking my Hurricanes
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Date: 9/11/2017 7:43:00 PM
Lovely.. good luck for a win, Dale!
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Date: 9/11/2017 5:06:00 PM
Wow Dale. This is an amazing poem with a great ending ! :) I really enjoyed this. Good luck in the contest. :)
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 9/11/2017 5:32:00 PM
Thanks, Heidi.

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