She Dances As If





Autum fluff and bright spirited smiles 
a jubilant child of grace and beauty 
She kicks up her feet and dances a mile 
as the breeze dances, she's electricty.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Buhagiar Avatar
September 2, 2024 at 9:09 AM
There's grace and beauty in this gem of a poem. Hugs.
DiMino Avatar
September 2, 2024 at 8:47 AM
Lovely, Vie; nothing more glorious than a child at innocent play. Very heartwarming. Beautiful read to start the day.
Ashley Avatar
August 31, 2024 at 9:36 AM
Dear Rose, my soulful friend, what joy! You capture the spirit of the young dancer with exuberant verse. Beautiful and uplifting. Warmest wishes, my sweet friend.. ~Susan
DiMino Avatar
August 31, 2024 at 7:33 AM
Doing my Happy-dance now. Inspiring joy. Well done. Flawless writing. A FAV!
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