Valsa George Poet Verse

She Dances

"She dances she glances
Beyond her shoulder 
She peers 
Looking back
Her beautiful smile 
She poses in the mirror"

She swings, she sways
Pliable like a gymnast
With graceful ease
In frenzied joy
Like a droplet
On lotus leaf!

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Linda Alice Fowler July 15, 2023 at 10:54 AM Oh, how sweet the dance! Congratulations on your win Valsa! :)

Paula Goldsmith July 14, 2023 at 8:33 AM Congratulation on your win. I can see her dancing/swings/sways. Have a blessed weekend writing away.............

Andrea Dietrich June 20, 2023 at 12:43 PM Great imagery.. Best of luck. i never win with Rick or I'd try this myself.

Jay Narain June 20, 2023 at 12:13 PM Wow, nice imagery with words, like drops on the lotus petals.

Michael Tor June 20, 2023 at 12:07 PM Lovely imagery created by your words as we see this motion filled dance, Valsa. Thank you for sharing...

Stephan McBride June 20, 2023 at 11:21 AM Love the creativity in the poem layout, and the gracefully poem : )

Victor Buhagiar June 20, 2023 at 9:37 AM A delightful dance, This poem has my full admiration.

Kim Rodrigues June 20, 2023 at 7:25 AM A beauty!

Anne-Lise Andresen June 20, 2023 at 6:46 AM - A joyful dance, Valsa :) - hugs

Sotto Poet June 20, 2023 at 6:46 AM It appears that she is quite content and an appealing person. Valsa, your contribution to the poem's prompt words conveys something really cool.

Vijay Pandit June 20, 2023 at 5:43 AM She is full of grace and joy. Nice complement to poem given, Valsa.