She Dances

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written 6/18/2023

She dances she glances Beyond her shoulder She peers Looking back Her beautiful smile She poses in the mirror" I take chances Slow dance, as I hold her Taste her ears Trace her back For a while While nearer

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Bill Baker

Date: 6/26/2023 4:15:00 PM

Your poetic words paint a clear picture for us. Dancing is like getting a big hug while in motion. Very enjoyable. I like moving in sync with a partner in any form of dancing when younger ... at 78 a good hug will do. :-) I enjoyed reading your poetry today, Eve. Write On! Bill

Joseph May

Date: 6/20/2023 10:11:00 AM

Lovely write Eve, Best wishes

Joanna Daniel

Date: 6/20/2023 4:51:00 AM

Wonderful entry, Eve:)

Jan Allison

Date: 6/19/2023 1:55:00 PM

I dance twice a week but not as sensually as this poem describes! hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper
Date: 6/19/2023 8:19:00 PM

I love to dance, now not as much.. would you believe 38 years of marriage my husband only danced once with me; maybe he was afraid I'd step on his feet.. I think I did the one time:)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/18/2023 10:18:00 PM

Many moons ago I used to live to dance. The slow waltz being my favorite. Now I can hardly walk :)

Eve Roper
Date: 6/19/2023 8:20:00 PM

I loved to twist and shout , that was my limit of dancing. thank you my friend for you warm comment.