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She Couldn't Save a devil's soul

She Couldn't Save a Devil's Soul she was so young and so sweet with a heart that felt very deep from a childhood of despair, easy prey in his snare he saw a target she'll be perfect, he'll make her think he's worth it Slowly he earns her trust, then break her down he must Quickly he shows his temper, still she doesn't make a whimper She tries to see past his mistakes, just do what ever it takes Still her tears are ignored, he is so angry she's became a bore Soon she realizes she can't stay, he will always be this way none if it she could control, she couldn't save a devils soul Valarie Miller

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Date: 5/2/2019 1:45:00 AM
superb poetic expression
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Valarie Miller
Date: 5/11/2019 1:50:00 AM
Oh wow thank you!
Date: 4/4/2019 10:13:00 PM
Powerful poem. We can be so easily manipulated.
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Valarie Miller
Date: 4/4/2019 10:19:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 3/25/2019 11:44:00 PM
ok I messed the title up and I am not a writer please be gentle it's the first poem I have written
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