She Bathed, We Craved

Arriving home from work
Hearing soft music play
Dimmed lights all around
Scented candle bouquet

Trails of rose petals
Pinks and reds
In sparodic lay
On our bed, spread

I hear humming
Amidst water splashing
I look and view
Tanned skin flashing

Blond hair in soak
As her body gleams
My mind in roam
With instant dreams

She beckons me over
By the bath I kneel
As we share a kiss
I internally feel

My hand she takes
Standing naked to bare
Whilst generous suds
Ignite my stare

Into my arms she falls
Towelled with warm
On the petals we await
Our pending storm

Adventurous we become
Caressing and kissing
United in love
Sharing inner wishing





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Date: 8/1/2010 5:32:00 AM
beautiful,those petals are so romantic,classic poem,lovely!
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Date: 7/29/2010 2:07:00 PM
wowowowoow Oh to be that adventure ...x Thank you for your kind comments ,,yes you are right not enough readers hahah sort them out James hahahahha fb you later x
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Date: 7/28/2010 7:50:00 AM
Whew James, your poems are getting hotter by the day! Very romantic and sensual. Haha, I feel like a peeping Tom (or whatever the female version is). I bet you sure know how to host the perfect romantic evening ;) ~ Sharon :)
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Date: 7/28/2010 7:05:00 AM
Very hot indeed Mr. Fraser ! I just loved it ! Have a pleasant day Sir ! james
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Date: 7/27/2010 9:24:00 PM
A sensuous write James.. Interesting way to start my day with a :) Wilma
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Date: 7/27/2010 12:31:00 PM
Moonstruck by a passionate tantalizing woman...Good job...Sara
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Date: 7/27/2010 7:15:00 AM
sensual write!
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Date: 7/26/2010 8:01:00 PM
A very passionate write creating romantic surroundings
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