Marie Kennedy Poet Free verse

She

She inhabits every corner of my mind, like wild spring flowers overtaking the meadow, she consumes me, yet she doesn't know that my heart yearns for her love, my arms ache for her soft embrace and my lips long to taste every inch of her, but she can't know this, must never know this for if she did I would lose my best friend, my soul mate, my reason to wake every morning and make it through the day.


this is my first attempt, feedback would be appriciated

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Beata Agustin September 8, 2025 at 7:28 AM Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Skat A January 28, 2016 at 11:30 AM HI MARIE.................SKAT

Skat A January 28, 2016 at 11:29 AM ENJOYING THIS A SECOND TIME. SKAT

Poet Destroyer A August 8, 2015 at 12:06 AM Marie, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A August 4, 2015 at 9:31 PM by the way, this is a good attempt at free verse. But, you might want to look up the form. I really don't know what this would fall under, perhaps verse alone. however, it is a good poem on SHE

Skat A August 4, 2015 at 9:30 PM Marie Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT