She

*****
     took all  
   my money
    alimony
      cow

humorlanterne

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Maurice Yvonne

April 9, 2015 at 7:52 AM

I too am divorced. I feel lucky. We came to a fair mutual agreement. Great write Peter!

Andrea Dietrich

March 31, 2015 at 6:03 PM

boy, she is not nice!! I enjoyed your lanterne. Hope it is not for the contest though, as that one was for a theme on "light."

Peter Lewis Holmes

April 1, 2015 at 8:41 AM

Thanks for the heads up Andrea!...I have resubmitted...Peter

John Fleming

March 29, 2015 at 3:06 PM

Heart worn on sleeve as per usual - Powerful and gritty!! Best regards, Peter!! :) john.

Jan Allison

March 29, 2015 at 11:43 AM

so few words say so much - powerfully penned Peter:-) Hugs Jan xx

Constance La France

March 29, 2015 at 9:50 AM

Peter, that is so sad, you sure let your feelings be known in words, well done, and thanks for visiting my poem, oh the memories . . .

Peter Lewis Holmes

March 29, 2015 at 10:55 AM

Thanks for reading me!..Peter.

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