She

She.... she loved me she told me so she kissed me And the world shook The world shook away a new place chiseled from her whim the bones of the earth the salt of her passion (she held me) and loved smiled fine By moonlight we walked in December her shadow fell across my soul.... the wind called her name she was with me she That night never ended since time stood still I did not age nor she We strolled the lunar lamp the silver love and not a clock chimed not a soul stirred (but she) Keith Hunt (c) 2000

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Gina Montalbo

Date: 5/16/2014 11:20:00 PM

Make me want to be she.... Gina

Gina Montalbo
Date: 5/17/2014 11:17:00 AM

Smiles and giggles...... Gina

Keith O.J. Hunt
Date: 5/17/2014 8:24:00 AM

For your eyes only Gina.... :-) (blush) Always, Keith

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/10/2014 11:18:00 PM

Hi Keith, Is She the one? I love how you kept on saying, (SHE) I think it's very romantic when a man's heart beats with nothing else BUT SHE.... You are an amzing poet. Goodnight, my newest friend... XOX ~Linda

Keith O.J. Hunt
Date: 4/11/2014 9:12:00 AM

Hi Linda, you are so sweet..... Is She the one? She was the one, I'm afraid, but it's always how I feel about my girl --- now that I'm pretty much single I can look back and write how I felt more effectively sometimes, but most my writes are old flames, some are recent, but not 100 girls compares to the One (She)!) I wrote this piece in 2000

Justin Bordner

Date: 4/9/2014 8:21:00 PM

There is very soft, simple and stupendous affection within the spirit of this poem Keith. I really feel how important she is to you, I can happily relate. J.A.B.

Larry Berdoo

Date: 4/9/2014 3:31:00 AM

WRITE ON! ~~Keith, well done.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/8/2014 3:08:00 PM

Dear Keith, Memories such as these are truly ageless, timeless. You have a very creative writing style and I enjoyed the poem. Best wishes, Carolyn

Verlena S. Walker

Date: 4/7/2014 11:28:00 PM

Beautiful Keith beautiful... Verlena