Lucilla Carrillo Poet Free verse

She

She says she's sad. She sings 
sad songs. Safe, scared, still 
sane, serious - she sculptures
statues.

She saw some scenes - she says
seemed sins. So she says. Satisfied
she sleeps...

10/09/2012
written by Lucilla M. Carrillo

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Debbie Duncan February 22, 2013 at 1:49 PM Seems she had fun writing this, thank you for reading " I call her name " you have a great day Lucy ;}

Poet Destroyer A December 10, 2012 at 9:34 PM Lucy, a lovely verse... deep.... staying away is good...pd

Michael J. Falotico October 14, 2012 at 1:31 PM Wonderful form. Very enjoyed your work I have read today. Brilliant poetry. Luv n hugs Michael

Rachel St.Cross October 11, 2012 at 3:27 PM ‡ She Seems And Sounds So Beautiful For Some Reason ? Tis A Sign Of A Gifted Poet To Create Such An Image In Breath !nd Life. Bringing To Light A Canvas Which Breathes. Love, Rachel ‡

Len Gasun October 10, 2012 at 8:49 PM hmmmmnnn....awesome write my friend, Lucilla. I love it. Thanks for sharing, your precious time reading my poem and wonderful comments. Love, Leonora

Andrea Dietrich October 10, 2012 at 4:04 PM this is very interesting one! Like a mini bio of someone. Who is it, Lucilla?

Linda-Marie Sweetheart October 10, 2012 at 2:56 PM BRAVO LUCY ON GREAT ALLITERATION IN THIS PASSIONATE PIECE .. BEST OF LUCK LUV ..

Sara Kendrick October 10, 2012 at 2:52 PM Interesting lines that you have penned..Enjoyed reading..I hope that it is not you sad..Thanks for stopping by..Your presence at my work is always uplifting..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown October 10, 2012 at 1:35 PM Stopping by your poetry list today to tell you thank you for your kind comments on my writing. Your comment was truly appreciated Lucilla. Love, Carol

Harry Horsman October 10, 2012 at 10:40 AM Oh this is clever poetry, very smart girl you are, a joy to read you Lucilla Lucilla Carrillo October 10, 2012 at 12:53 PM Thank you Harry; I was just messing around with words. You'd be suprised what you can come up with. Lucy

Anne-Lise Andresen October 10, 2012 at 3:25 AM Very good written, Lucilla - I like it. - oxox love Anne-Lise :) Lucilla Carrillo October 10, 2012 at 12:51 PM Thank you Anne Lise, I'm glad that you like it. lucy

Robert Pettit October 10, 2012 at 12:25 AM Your title reminded me of a cheap B-picture from the sixties starring bombshell Ursula Andress. It is difficult to write a coherent poem with all the words starting with just one letter. You pulled the trick off rather well here. Lucilla Carrillo October 10, 2012 at 12:50 PM Robert - you look very young, yet you talk about the 60's like you had lived back then.Thanks for reading. Lucy