She

It was her kiss
that sent a shaft of light
into confounding blackness where the dead
would hold their rites of cold fraternity--
as if the border of that town were there
to mark a private paradise.

Her kiss, I found enough
to counteract those graceless thoughts
that swept across the meadow of my mind
like fresh cold winds 
intruding on an evening stroll.
I sought her there, of course;
I needed something cosmic,
something of the world outside
to pull me from the pit of disillusionment.

I think she knew that there would be
no waking in the idle laughter that she heard--
no sighing softness under her caress, 
(should she be bold enough to touch cold flesh)
and so she took my hand, and then she kissed me!
Though I knew her not, her warmth,
the fulness of her lips
brought joy beyond exuberance, for then
the blistered morn in radiance
could magnify the sun,
while she and I and all the blessed earth
were one.
                    ~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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July 29, 2012 at 4:20 PM
This I get.The call of nature. Such a powerful source of nature. Well done. Jean.
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August 1, 2012 at 6:02 PM
Thank you so much!
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July 12, 2012 at 10:22 PM
‡ I Agree With Amazing & Beautiful Charlotte, My Dear Sweet Robert, In That Yessss, Tis Sounds As Though The Most Beautiful Kissss * You, Soft & Only, You, Lost & Lonely, You, Just Like Heaven * Show Me Show Me Show Me How You Do That Trick, The One That Makes Me Scream She Said, The One That Makes Me Laugh She Said, Then Threw Her Arms Around My Neck * Your Just Like A Dream, Your Just Like A Dream * I Love Your Magnificent Poem, Very Much & Yesss Again, It Is Beautiful & Going To The Deepest Ocean In My Faves * My Luv, Rachel ‡
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July 12, 2012 at 11:31 PM
Oh my, with praise such as this I'll not be able to get my head through the door! What can I say, other than to bough low and pledge my humble servanthood. You are very sweet. -Dean
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July 12, 2012 at 1:20 PM
that was some kiss :-) I guess we all need something cosmic at times...you write extremely well, and this is my fave one of yours so far...
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July 12, 2012 at 1:28 PM
Charlotte, thank you so much.
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