She

Oh what a delight for me to see The girl that I love, when she passes by me Oh how I wish I could foresee When I ask of her hand to be with me. Simplicity, is she just like a lily Until it blooms you won’t see its beauty She never thought of things as complicated Because of that she had me captivated. She smiles and jokes like a child And when with me is always mild Her childish manners give her sweetness This in turn loses my toughness. Oh how I wish for her full attention Because sometimes for her I am non existent This is too bad for me when I mention But for love I will always be persistent. She will always be nostalgic From time to time even it is tragic Won’t she be mine, I don’t mind But my love to her I will always find.

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Paul Beadnall

Date: 7/12/2011 4:06:00 AM

Lovely portrayel of your intended. Your feelings have a similarity my friend.. Re My poem "Speach". I dont know how you would like me to elaborate, if you would like it in simplar terms or how i came across my affliction? For every thing speaks for itself. I get tensed in awkward situations that another person is everyday life, which effects my speach, i stutter or try to avoid conversation,when i know my feelings arn`t at ease and will stammer.

Glenn Sentes

Date: 7/10/2011 6:22:00 AM

"smiles and jokes like a child" ahhh! My kind of lass! Magaling kapatid! Sulat ka pa... :)