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She

honey brown skin
warm, soft
black angel hair
long, lovely

now lusterless 
with dead doll eyes 
and skin like parchment 
cold, colorless
her deep red lips
now unable to utter
a single beautiful noise

a perfect, silent
motionless sculpture
until time
turns to dust
her pretty 
little eyes

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/9/2016 10:38:00 PM
JOaNN, you have a great way of expressing yourself through your poems... ~LINDA~
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Date: 2/9/2011 12:16:00 PM
Welcome to PoetrySoup JoAnn. I know this is a late welcome but, I have some very pressing matters going on at the present time. I hope to be back and at full speed in the next couple of weeks. Until then please keep writing and sharing your poetry. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/8/2011 2:46:00 PM
This tribute to the deceased is an Elegy. A nice, descriptive poem illuminating the artificial, ephemeral beauty of a still life, dead body. It is so oxymoronic, yet the temporal dressing of the dead body gives it some aesthetic appeal. You did misspell lusterless! A worthy, thought-provoking poem that should have been consumed by the members of the club.
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