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Approach the eve of shadows Twilight, The suns after glow In aroma with essence Darkness, Her asylum of security In a muse of dream She comforts, Within nocturnals bliss PS it sounds unfinished,i agree.But i kinda like it that way.

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Date: 6/21/2010 8:54:00 AM
This is excellent. It flows very well. The flow from twilight to nocturnal bliss is right on point. Great job! Joseph
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Date: 6/19/2010 9:03:00 PM
This is just what I needed before heading to dreamland..lovely. BG
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Date: 6/19/2010 7:10:00 PM
love it, it came together wonderfully so I agree with you, enjoyed the read..P.D.
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