"she"

Approach the eve of shadows
Twilight,
The suns after glow

In aroma with essence
Darkness,
Her asylum of security

In a muse of dream
She comforts,
Within nocturnals bliss



PS it sounds unfinished,i agree.But i kinda like it that way.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Spence Sr Avatar
June 21, 2010 at 8:54 AM
This is excellent. It flows very well. The flow from twilight to nocturnal bliss is right on point. Great job! Joseph
Gorelick Avatar
June 19, 2010 at 9:03 PM
This is just what I needed before heading to dreamland..lovely. BG
A   Avatar
June 19, 2010 at 7:10 PM
love it, it came together wonderfully so I agree with you, enjoyed the read..P.D.
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