She

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She never expected to be anyone, only a shadow on the shade. A big hat to be covered from the sun. Once she took her hat off, she could see he beauty around.

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Timothy Ray

Date: 7/25/2023 6:10:00 PM

so simple in its logic and a light existence that steps boldly out....into the freedom to be...loved it

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 7/26/2023 12:14:00 AM

Thank you Timothy...!

Franci Hoffman

Date: 7/24/2023 5:48:00 PM

Beautiful! Once we venture out from the shade and uncover our true selves, we see the light and beyond.

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 7/25/2023 12:48:00 AM

Thank you Franci. Yes, indeed. You are right...