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She

She never expected to be anyone, 
         only a shadow on the shade.
             A big hat to be covered 
                      from the sun.
           Once she took her hat off, 
                     she could see 
                 he beauty around.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Ray Avatar
July 25, 2023 at 6:10 PM
so simple in its logic and a light existence that steps boldly out....into the freedom to be...loved it
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
July 26, 2023 at 12:14 AM
Thank you Timothy...!
Hoffman Avatar
July 24, 2023 at 5:48 PM
Beautiful! Once we venture out from the shade and uncover our true selves, we see the light and beyond.
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
July 25, 2023 at 12:48 AM
Thank you Franci. Yes, indeed. You are right...
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