Larry Bradfield Poet Diminished Hexaverse

She

She was a beauty -
Blue eyes, golden hair
I asked her to dance
She seemed reluctant
But danced anyway

Music was right
So we danced slow
Loved the rhythm
Felt our hearts beat

Reluctant 
She had been
But no more

I love
you said

She

1-16-19
Contest>Any Theme Diminishing Hexaverse
Sponsor:Charles Massina

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Andrea Dietrich January 27, 2019 at 3:27 PM this is so charming and sweet. Love how you took it down to the SHE. Congrats on the win.

Charles Messina January 27, 2019 at 9:03 AM Awesome poetry and great write on this form, Larry. Congratulations on your 2nd place win. All the best, Charlie Larry Bradfield January 27, 2019 at 10:22 AM Thanks for the words and the placement, Charlie. My pleasure

Line Gauthier January 18, 2019 at 12:46 AM Absolutely lovely, Larry. Larry Bradfield January 18, 2019 at 2:35 PM Thank you Line..I appreciate it!