She

SHE She walked into the room All eyes were on her 18 November 2018 For the contest sponsored by Lewis Raynes

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 11/20/2018 2:33:00 PM

Hello Curtis, yes some women do have the attention when they walk into a room. Have a nice day my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/20/2018 5:25:00 PM

Hello Curtis, well you did a great job on this poem.

Curtis Moorman
Date: 11/20/2018 3:19:00 PM

Hi, Darlene! The sponsor asked for a poem that denoted sexy. In my opinion, a woman who can walk into a room and have every eye trained on her is the epitome of sexy --- not in a vulgar sense, but in a sense of being secure in the fact that she is beautiful but not pride or boastful. She is humble instead. And that is sexy! Thank you for stopping by. It's always a pleasure!

Silent One

Date: 11/18/2018 10:36:00 AM

Now that is some lady....

Curtis Moorman
Date: 11/18/2018 1:12:00 PM

Absolutely! A real knockout! When she steps into a room, she doesn't walk -- she strides! That is sexy!! And that is what the sponsor asked for in his contest.

Jan Allison

Date: 11/18/2018 7:37:00 AM

Oh how wonderful Curtis,so few words say so much! Good luck with the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Curtis Moorman
Date: 11/18/2018 1:10:00 PM

A picture is worth a thousand words. Well, the contest asked for a poem on sexy and I tried to do what he asked for. Hope it does the trick!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 11/18/2018 7:11:00 AM

She must have been a real beauty Curtis. Good luck. Tom.

Curtis Moorman
Date: 11/18/2018 1:08:00 PM

Startling!! The epitome of the sexy poem asked for.