She

SHE

She walked into the room
All eyes were on her

18 November 2018
For the contest sponsored by Lewis Raynes
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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De Beaulieu Avatar
November 20, 2018 at 2:33 PM
Hello Curtis, yes some women do have the attention when they walk into a room. Have a nice day my friend.
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November 20, 2018 at 5:25 PM
Hello Curtis, well you did a great job on this poem.
Moorman Avatar
November 20, 2018 at 3:19 PM
Hi, Darlene! The sponsor asked for a poem that denoted sexy. In my opinion, a woman who can walk into a room and have every eye trained on her is the epitome of sexy --- not in a vulgar sense, but in a sense of being secure in the fact that she is beautiful but not pride or boastful. She is humble instead. And that is sexy! Thank you for stopping by. It's always a pleasure!
One Avatar
November 18, 2018 at 10:36 AM
Now that is some lady....
Moorman Avatar
November 18, 2018 at 1:12 PM
Absolutely! A real knockout! When she steps into a room, she doesn't walk -- she strides! That is sexy!! And that is what the sponsor asked for in his contest.
Allison Avatar
November 18, 2018 at 7:37 AM
Oh how wonderful Curtis,so few words say so much! Good luck with the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Moorman Avatar
November 18, 2018 at 1:10 PM
A picture is worth a thousand words. Well, the contest asked for a poem on sexy and I tried to do what he asked for. Hope it does the trick!
Cunningham Avatar
November 18, 2018 at 7:11 AM
She must have been a real beauty Curtis. Good luck. Tom.
Moorman Avatar
November 18, 2018 at 1:08 PM
Startling!! The epitome of the sexy poem asked for.
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