Shattered Pieces

I walk along the shoreline in the rain.

Heart broken, memories flooding my mind.

Tears streaming from my eyes, in pain.

Your final words, trying to be kind.

The shattered pieces of my heart, will I find?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Pettit Avatar
January 11, 2011 at 10:25 PM
You are very adept at writing a quintain. You have done it again here.
Fraser Avatar
November 13, 2010 at 6:14 PM
Deep heartfelt emotion in this short piece Francine >> James :)
Devonshire Avatar
November 8, 2010 at 9:13 AM
If you find those pieces, please let me know where to look, Francine. A very sad and moving quintain with perfect form. If this is for the contest, I wish you success! Love, Carolyn
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