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Shattered People

Broken to pieces, their dots never match, 
Their outline is more like a maze,
After their clear and precise had flown away, 
Leaving their mind in a haze,

Like clouds in the wind, with a rainbow of tears, 
Over cheeks of a rocky embrace,
Still, the more we see, the more we love, 
Their truly pure broken cliff face,

So, we sit and we listen to all that they say, 
With a coffee we have a long talk,
And, when they’re in the mood for more, 
We go for a beautiful walk,

Till their dots all join back up again, 
Till their rainbow has fled with the light,
Till all of those broken pieces of them, 
Are, again, happy and cheery and bright.


For Richard Lamoureux’s contest “People”. Written 4th Dec 2017
Awarded a 4th place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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S     Avatar
December 13, 2017 at 8:52 AM
Back to say Congrats Lewis!!!! Great write !! Well deserved!
Raynes Avatar
December 13, 2017 at 5:42 PM
Thanks Judy :)
Roper Avatar
December 11, 2017 at 7:59 PM
Lewis, nice write, congratulations on your win :) Hugs
Raynes Avatar
December 13, 2017 at 5:42 PM
Thanks Eve :)
Lamoureux Avatar
December 11, 2017 at 6:50 PM
Thanks for entering my contest, congrats on your 4th place finish.
Raynes Avatar
December 11, 2017 at 7:27 PM
wow, thank you for the prompt Richard. Thanks for the placement :)
Pigeon Tart Avatar
December 3, 2017 at 10:21 PM
I like what you've done here :) wonderful pen Lewis xomo
Raynes Avatar
December 3, 2017 at 11:16 PM
Thankyou Maureen glad u enjoyed this.
S     Avatar
December 3, 2017 at 9:20 PM
One of my favorites thus far !!! Great write Lewis!!
Raynes Avatar
December 3, 2017 at 9:31 PM
I'm glad u like these pieces of thoughts in writing Judy :)
Rodrigues Avatar
December 3, 2017 at 9:14 PM
The third verse is my favorite! Nice, Lewis!
Raynes Avatar
December 3, 2017 at 9:31 PM
a coffee, a talk, a walk... always works wonders... friends :)
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