Shattered Glass

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Written: August 29, 2023 ________________________________________________________________ Reflective glass shows Truths hidden, shattered, or bright~ Your first step awaits Mirror's truth revealed Tinted, clear, or fractured view~ Embrace your debut In the mirror's gaze Tinted hues or crystal clear~ Unveil your entrance

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Speaks Volumes

Date: 9/3/2023 12:29:00 AM

I just read Judy's comment and your response dear poet. I was way off the mark with what I read into your poem. I count it as lovely set anyway.

Speaks Volumes

Date: 9/3/2023 12:27:00 AM

You are a master and using a set of Haikus to put forward a single idea. The reflections show broken and perfect images, yet combined meld to one unique piece. A sweet thought.

Paige Hind

Date: 8/30/2023 10:27:00 AM

I enjoyed your haikus! You had a lot to say about reflections...

Judy Ball

Date: 8/29/2023 6:41:00 PM

Did I get this right? ;) JB

Judy Ball

Date: 8/29/2023 6:39:00 PM

This is really a deep and reflective poem in itself. What I get from this is that if we stand back and try to look at ourself and our life objectively we will discover the image we put forth to the world. By so doing we will be able to correct what needs correcting. In other words, accentuate the positive and eliminate the negative. A very enlightening piece. Bravo my friend. Love it. God Bless, JB

Sotto Poet
Date: 8/29/2023 7:07:00 PM

Judy, your observation is astute - this haiku instills a sense of motivation, urging us to strive for greatness and persist in the face of daunting obstacles. It serves as a vivid reminder that the path to perfection may be arduous, yet it ignites a fiery determination within us to never waver in our pursuit of excellence. Thanks for your kind words