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Shattered Dream: a Bride story

Come near me, my love.
Come and hold my hands.
I've been merrily waiting for you.
Can you hear that wistful piano sound?
Everyone had gathered, prayers are spoken. 
 
Come near me, my love.
Come and sit on my side.
Why can't you speak a word?
Don't you think I look beautiful in this trousseau? 
Now, wear me the ring, for I can't wait to say I do.

Come near me, my love
Come now and gaze on my face as you usually did.
Oh I wish I could dry your tears,
I wish I can smile and whisper in your ear
How grateful I am for the moments we had.

Come near me, my love
Come now and bring me flowers
Hand me a perfect bouquet of love.
Because I did love you until my end
And I will be blessing you, even in this death.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 7/28/2013 12:32:00 PM
This was awesome in its entirety Shirley.Missed reading from you.
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Date: 7/28/2013 9:41:00 AM
Ah Shirley...This gem wounded my heart with such sweet sorrow...So elegantly written with perfect flow...Congratulations - Tim
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Date: 7/25/2013 9:49:00 PM
Shirley; Congratulations with your win in Drake's Confessional contest. take care- LINDA
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Date: 7/25/2013 6:45:00 PM
WOW... this one gave me chills. Phenomenal writing. Congratulations on your well deserved win :) Going in my faves
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Date: 7/25/2013 6:32:00 PM
This is so good! Congratulations.
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Date: 7/25/2013 4:06:00 PM
poignant congrats on win Shadow x smiles
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Date: 7/25/2013 2:10:00 PM
Shirley, good going in the -The Confessional- contest. CONGRATULATIONS:-) Have yourself a great day. >SKAT<
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Date: 7/25/2013 7:50:00 AM
MY PS! You got an honorable mention on my "Confessional" contest! I can't believe you wrote this! =D This was so enchanting, then you hit me with the ending! What an ending! Wonderful job!
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Date: 7/6/2013 10:06:00 AM
wow, this is amazing!!! What an interesting poem. This gets a FAVE from me!
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Date: 7/6/2013 10:33:00 AM
I'm Honored, Andrea..Thank you :))
Date: 7/6/2013 7:05:00 AM
Hi Shirley, Reading the first few lines I thought you needed to get in touch with my fix-heart.com urgently, but by the end it was me who was left heart-broken :( Jag
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Date: 7/6/2013 8:33:00 AM
An apology sent for making you felt heart-broken, Jag. But dont worry..even death cannot divides such a true love like that ;)