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Shattered Dream

"Shattered Dream" From the very beginning, Somebody is dreaming, To be with someone, But its seems like no one. Unable to speak the words, To utter the love he could, So the feeling's gone to waste, Loneliness filled with emptiness, Its takes many years to reveal, The love he wants to tell, To a very special girl, But it’s already a shattered dream. to: EG (^_^)

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Date: 8/8/2012 8:54:00 PM
your very talented :)
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Date: 8/4/2012 9:05:00 AM
Beautifully sad. well written. Thanks for the read.. TC
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Bukang Liwayway
Date: 8/4/2012 9:57:00 AM
yeah, its sad coz' it takes 24 years to know the truth....thanks friend Terry :)
Date: 8/1/2012 12:39:00 PM
Welcome to the site !!!! This is a great poem I'm going to look forward to reading your work Jon
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Bukang Liwayway
Date: 8/1/2012 9:43:00 PM
thanks Jon :) Have a nice day!!
Date: 8/1/2012 7:42:00 AM
Lovely and good poem Mary - like it/well done !!! - Have a nice day in sunshine - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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Bukang Liwayway
Date: 8/1/2012 8:22:00 AM
thanks Anne (^_^) You are one of my fav poet coz i've read some of your poems..God bless!! **Mary**
Date: 8/1/2012 4:55:00 AM
Mary a warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol
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Bukang Liwayway
Date: 8/1/2012 8:19:00 AM
many thanks to you Carol..I'm so happy to be here...I read some of your poems..you are an excellent writer...keep up the good work..God bless you always!!! (^_^)
Date: 7/31/2012 8:53:00 AM
Wow! It's another wonderful poem, Mary! I like it.
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Bukang Liwayway
Date: 7/31/2012 11:23:00 PM
Thanks Nore...God bless

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