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Shattered Coral

Blood of gems crosses the tides a fractured tremor of a weary river fog of marrow diluted by tremors spines chained to the edges of a coral sinking deep stones upon a shore that quivers and the body hears only a wave mute that carves.

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Date: 6/21/2025 11:43:00 AM
Ethereal and haunting, this poem flows like a dreamscape—visceral yet elusive. Its imagery is both delicate and powerful: "blood of gems," "fog of marrow," and "spines chained" evoke a quiet struggle against unseen forces. The final lines ache with a silence that speaks volumes. A beautifully abstract meditation on erosion—of land, body, and self.
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