Shatter

I cower here alone, Surrounded by the dark, The pain is unbearable, The remnants of my broken heart. You shattered me to pieces, Opened up all my wounds, You left me in the darkness, Alone to face my inevitable doom. My heart was once a whole, I trusted it to you, You were my everything, My heart had found a new. I had found my serenity, My abundance of joy in you, I thought you were meant for me, Yet I never pronounced my love for you. That caused the first crack in my heart, Shards scatter into the darkness, You leave me wounded and weak, My heart still bleeds for you. I stand alone, Crippled in the darkness, The shadow you once cast next to mine now lurks all around, The pain tore me open, Leaving me hollow on the ground. You shattered my heart into blades, I can’t believe I bled over you, Stabbing me from within, With you my emotions left too. I lay in the darkness, Alone, A shattered remnant of who I once was, Waiting for the end to come.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 8/27/2011 3:56:00 PM
Magnificent write Shane, I know know the feeling of being gut shot by divorce. Keep writing it helps. Best wishes, Glenna
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Date: 8/17/2011 9:16:00 AM
Ah, the angst of separation described with such sadness, A lovely verse.
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Date: 8/17/2011 8:58:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your creative poetry with us Shane. I enjoyed reading it this morning. I will be back another time to read more. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/16/2011 11:16:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative write tonight.. enjoy the site with its many features as u continue to share words with luv..
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Date: 8/16/2011 10:14:00 PM
Very touchy and poignant expressions, Shane
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Date: 8/16/2011 1:08:00 PM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you today. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be Shane. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 8/16/2011 1:03:00 PM
this is such a heartfelt write, Shane-- one could definitely feel that pain-- very well written...
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