Shasta

. Shasta Daisy white Yellow face to light teardrop Burdock passed gone

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 4/23/2010 5:59:00 PM

missed you.---I sent an email to the soup adm. for you. hope it helped.

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 4/23/2010 5:58:00 PM

my little garden is coming up. don't know if it will make anything. Wayne made a tomato bed and carved Caleb's name on it with a cartoon of a truck. it is real cute!! when he gets through you will have to see it.

James Fraser

Date: 4/23/2010 9:08:00 AM

Delightful Haiku Sara, i like this one >> good luck in the contest >> James

Gert W. Knop

Date: 4/23/2010 2:52:00 AM

Very creative write, Sara! Thank you for sharing it on PS and thankl you for your comments. I had problems with my emails but now it is ok again. Have a nice weekend...Gert

John Freeman

Date: 4/20/2010 5:29:00 PM

Congratulations Sara on a fine presentation for the competition. A vey worthy poem it is. Agape, Moses

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 4/20/2010 8:45:00 AM

I really enjoy your writing Sara,i do wish i have more time so I could read more of my friends..and more of you dear friend,but my day is full,full,full..much enjoyed Haiku..Charma

Lynette Chachere

Date: 4/20/2010 8:03:00 AM

i once had a dog by the name of Shasta. you make teardrop sound bissful with yellow and light. small words with large imagery as always. -Always&Forever Lynette