Sara Kendrick Poet Haiku

Shasta

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                                                      Shasta Daisy white
                                              Yellow face to light teardrop
                                                     Burdock passed gone

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Doris Culverhouse April 23, 2010 at 5:59 PM missed you.---I sent an email to the soup adm. for you. hope it helped.

Doris Culverhouse April 23, 2010 at 5:58 PM my little garden is coming up. don't know if it will make anything. Wayne made a tomato bed and carved Caleb's name on it with a cartoon of a truck. it is real cute!! when he gets through you will have to see it.

James Fraser April 23, 2010 at 9:08 AM Delightful Haiku Sara, i like this one >> good luck in the contest >> James

Gert W. Knop April 23, 2010 at 2:52 AM Very creative write, Sara! Thank you for sharing it on PS and thankl you for your comments. I had problems with my emails but now it is ok again. Have a nice weekend...Gert

John Freeman April 20, 2010 at 5:29 PM Congratulations Sara on a fine presentation for the competition. A vey worthy poem it is. Agape, Moses

Charmaine Chircop April 20, 2010 at 8:45 AM I really enjoy your writing Sara,i do wish i have more time so I could read more of my friends..and more of you dear friend,but my day is full,full,full..much enjoyed Haiku..Charma

Lynette Chachere April 20, 2010 at 8:03 AM i once had a dog by the name of Shasta. you make teardrop sound bissful with yellow and light. small words with large imagery as always. -Always&Forever Lynette

Niall Greene April 20, 2010 at 7:07 AM hey sara thnx u for always commenting on my oems could u soup mail me iv a few ?s to ask u about poetry

Dr.Ram Mehta April 20, 2010 at 6:56 AM well penned haiku with nice images

Doris Culverhouse April 20, 2010 at 3:58 AM Our daisies are blooming I noticed yesterday. I have a beautiful antique mauve iris in my front bed that is blooming.

Poet Destroyer A April 20, 2010 at 3:31 AM Nice one, Sara- have yourself a good day..