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Sharing the Sunset

Walking softly on the evening sand.
I can feel the softness of you hand.
I don't need to try and find the words to say.
Enjoying things that make me feel this way.
The sand feels so loose beneath our feet.
This moment in time makes me feel so complete.
Looking across the water as the sun slowly dips.
Like a huge animal that's bending down to sip.
I can smell your sweet fragrance with you so near.
The winds faintest of whisper ringing in my ear.
Forever in time, this moment stands still.
Aching to hold you so close, that's how I feel.
A walk on the beach, hand in hand, like we just met.
There's just nothing like it, we are sharing the sunset.

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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February 24, 2017 at 4:28 AM
Dear Donald....It is so beautiful..."The winds faintest of whisper ringing in my ear. Forever in time, this moment stands still."....I could personally relate to it....
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April 4, 2013 at 8:24 PM
Dear Donald, This is so Perfectly written, I feel Lenore and I were walking behind YOU as YOU pointed out the Sight and feel of an Evening Stroll. Superb Quill.With LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry
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