Sharing

We have become so much more than we were before.
What started as a brief encounter , 
has become an important part of who we are.
Dialogue is ever shifting,
nothing is too personal to say.
Our deepest thoughts,
our silliest ideas,
everything is shared.
We continue to talk,
about what is in our hearts and on our minds.
Our souls are bared, visions discussed,
families dissected.
Inner thoughts are given voice!
What came before, what yet may be.
Our visions are formed,
into ideas to be explored.
Everything and nothing is said and many times laughed about.
Our inner emotions come to the fore, thoughts shared,
discussed and given voice.
Only to us are these things important.
We share as only true friends can share.
We are both blessed.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Lamoureux Avatar
February 8, 2014 at 8:21 AM
Good morning Mom, we are safe and sound in Mexico. Love Ya!
Bear Avatar
January 27, 2014 at 7:05 PM
With inspirations from all of you how can one not write things one feels All of your comments are appreciated but the mamabear can not ever come up to the quaity of my son He is truly amazing in his writes. Thanks to all of you for your comments. They are really appreciated. Edith
Lamoureux Avatar
January 27, 2014 at 5:41 PM
It looks good mom, you did an excellent job. You are getting better and better.
Manassian Avatar
January 27, 2014 at 5:12 PM
This is beautiful, Mama Bear. True friendships like this are rare. I'm so glad that you have such a friend. You and your son have a very similar way of expressing yourselves. For a moment....It felt like I was reading his words. :) Lovely read.
Lamoureux Avatar
January 27, 2014 at 5:38 PM
All Mama Bear except the second last line, I offered a small suggestion. It is so cool to see mom writing.
Rhinem Avatar
January 27, 2014 at 3:23 PM
))*)*:* "!BEAUTIFUL!" *:*(*\\\
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