Chris Green Poet Rhyme

Shared Twinkles

Shared twinkles


I gaze up at a star,
upon the evening sky,
lost within the twinkle of its light

And hoping where you are,
you’re gazing up as well.
so we may share it’s twinkle on this night

For as I watch it shine
this chilly autumn eve
a twinkle in the heavens up above

I know this special star
and the twinkle that it sends
illuminates our never ending love


Good night Soupers

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Connie Marcum Wong October 31, 2018 at 1:45 PM I would love for you to put all these glorious poems into a book of poetry I can open to any page and read at random your delightful words. Please tell me you will be publishing a poetry book of your work? I would buy several copies to also share with others. I adored this romantic beauty Chris! : ) xxoo Chris Green October 31, 2018 at 1:52 PM Oh Connie, I am sorry but I don't see that happening anytime soon. But I do appreciate you asking me and for your always wonderful and encouraging comments on my poems. I so look forward to your visits.

Gershon Wolf October 31, 2018 at 1:29 PM I love the twinkle in your pen, O Poet! Another great one! Best wishes, Gershon Chris Green October 31, 2018 at 1:51 PM Thank you Gershon for always being so kind to me

John Lawless October 31, 2018 at 9:10 AM AWWW....Really nice Chris. I think we've all lost our dreams in the stars on occasion. Chris Green October 31, 2018 at 10:03 AM I think you are right. :) Thanks so much John.

Heidi Sands October 31, 2018 at 8:17 AM An illumination of never ending love, as it should be. This poem shines. I will leave out the sweetness, to not create an overdose lol :) Well done! Chris Green October 31, 2018 at 8:40 AM Thanks so much my friend. And that's ok...overdosing on sweets can't be all that bad. : )

Anne-Lise Andresen October 31, 2018 at 4:27 AM - A wonderful poem, Chris ... - Good night ... dream of this star :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Chris Green October 31, 2018 at 7:48 AM Thank you so very much Anne-Lise

Susan Ashley October 30, 2018 at 10:06 PM Chris, the beauty of your verses sparkle in the soft luminescence of romantic starlight and sweet sighs. Luscious poetry. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan Chris Green October 31, 2018 at 7:48 AM Thank you Susan. I appreciate your wonderful comment on my poem

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart October 30, 2018 at 10:02 PM Sweet poem :) good night! xomo Chris Green October 31, 2018 at 7:48 AM Thanks so much my friend.

Ilene Bauer October 30, 2018 at 6:33 PM just beautiful, chris! good night to you, too... Chris Green October 31, 2018 at 7:48 AM Thank you so very much Ilene

Sunlite Wanter October 30, 2018 at 6:31 PM It always thrills me to think that someone a long way away is seeing the same twinkle that I am. Sweet dreams. Chris Green October 31, 2018 at 7:48 AM I know what you mean my friend. It would be nice to know if it were happening and it was someone you cared for. Thank you so much.

Jan Allison October 30, 2018 at 6:14 PM aww what a sweet poem Chris:-) good night sweet dreams:-) hugs jan xx Chris Green October 31, 2018 at 7:47 AM Thanks you so much Jan