Chiquitachiamaka Baity Poet Romanticism

Share My Love

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Come and share my love,
I’ll give you all of me
Offer everything I am
Give it graciously

Come and share my love
I want to lose myself
Surrender everything I own
Until I have nothing left

Come and share my love
Let’s lay the night away
As I wrap my warmth around you
Until dawn, turns to day


Come and share my love
Like you’ve been yearning to do
Your every wish is my command
I will submit to you


Chiquita Chiamaka Baity

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Roman Chebukin September 18, 2011 at 1:29 AM i like how you put the title of the poem in every starting sentence. that was dope. i loved it reading it.

Saurabh Gupta August 16, 2011 at 12:06 PM really sensuous..........lovely write....

Gary Fields August 7, 2011 at 10:37 PM Risky, Risky,Risky but commendable.... I love it when a good love happen's and it doe's have it's place. But remember that love is personal and your's to feel what you like even if it dosen't pan out. Even if he is a jerk, do not let him tak your love away, it's your's..... Let this be a lesson to ya! Your friend in the pen/G.FIELDS Chiquitachiamaka Baity August 7, 2011 at 11:30 PM Some Risk are worth taking...lol

Rockman Pritts August 6, 2011 at 1:37 AM WOW!! That's what every man longs to hear. You sure do know how to raise an interest. Your lips breed intoxicating words cultivated from a fertile mind that is littered with sensuality. It was certainly a pleasure to read. WHEW!! Thanks again. Rockman :-)

Charles Melody Lightning Ink August 5, 2011 at 2:37 PM when there is true love, there is true relaxation of mind... i wish you the best baby, in your-love life.

James Peranteau August 5, 2011 at 7:52 AM Chiquita, yet another poetic delight dear poet ! Yet, about your form listed; never use the form; "I do not know", just my suggestion Chiquita. My suggestion is, to use the form; 'Free Verse', or, 'Romanticisim'. Look them up on, 'Forms of poetry' on the left of your window here. Oh, I for sure am enjoying your poetic talent ! Until later ! Much love, james

Russell Sivey August 5, 2011 at 2:19 AM I love the poem! Completes the story, wonderfully crafted!

Elizabeth Wesley August 5, 2011 at 12:01 AM Sounds like a great way to go ( if you have the strength)!

Jack Ross Jr. August 4, 2011 at 11:46 PM WOW, another sizzler yikes!