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White blossoms of the Mountain Laurel Contrasted to the waxy green leaves Nestled under trees along the creek Showing some of the beauty of spring Snuggled on a blanket close to the edge Enjoying the music that nature makes Chirping of birds, no no not a word said Rustle of leaves, buzz, buzzing of bees Babbble of creek, splash of the deer's feet Joy, oh, joy for the outdoor cheer Wishing that we could share this time This time of the year

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Matt Caliri

Date: 12/23/2009 8:17:00 AM

This makes you want to be there...especially with all that gentle babbling going on...

James Fraser

Date: 12/18/2009 12:54:00 PM

A joy to read this one Sara, well worthy of the lovely comments >> James

L'Nass Shango

Date: 12/15/2009 7:27:00 AM

I share the spirit of release and joy ... thanks for an enjoyable read

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/14/2009 7:17:00 PM

Lovely joyous scene and great visual qualities in your poetry Sara.. this seems it was a special write for u... enjoyed.. blessings... luv... thankxxx for your nice comments on my poetry also.... Linda-Marie...

David Byrne

Date: 12/14/2009 6:04:00 PM

Reminds me of Little House on the Prarie, in a good way.......................smile!

Audrey Haick

Date: 12/14/2009 7:32:00 AM

Beautiful imagery, Sara! You have painted a wonderful picture with your words. I would love to see this scene-live! Peace and love, Audrey

Robert Ball

Date: 12/14/2009 4:39:00 AM

this one is very good but alas, I'm long winded and can't write short and sweet, this poem touched me being from New England originally. Keep up the good work. Robert Ball

Colleen Bono

Date: 12/13/2009 8:39:00 PM

this is very good.I have a new poem posted but not as good as this one.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/13/2009 7:39:00 PM

Refreshing and delightful imagery, Sara! Very nice work in this write. Love, Carolyn

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 12/13/2009 5:41:00 PM

nice one mom, great , keep it up, :) I heard Cotton Joined the church this am. Selah.

Carrie Richards

Date: 12/13/2009 5:36:00 PM

You paint such a lovely picture...this was wonderful. If we can't be there, at least we can close our eyes and pretend. ~ Carrie

Lynette Chachere

Date: 12/13/2009 1:43:00 PM

This reminds me of Emily Dickinson's poem, "Bee I'm Expecting you" because the fly trys to speak to the bee.it's really cute.nature and animals are always a peaceful write.great poem. -Lynette

Mary Meade Stephenson

Date: 12/13/2009 12:30:00 PM

Oh what a wonderfully glorious pic you have painted here with words.Superb job Sara and thanks so much for sharing and for your always kind comments! God Bless~Mary

Anthony Nutter

Date: 12/13/2009 10:21:00 AM

Enjoyed this vivid nature write. Nice piece. A. W. Nutter www.freewebs.com/abcedit

Florentina Laic

Date: 12/13/2009 9:44:00 AM

Wonderful joy and love for nature sharing, Sara. Love, Florentina

Brian Strand

Date: 12/13/2009 7:52:00 AM

I like your style Sara.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments