Shapeless

much like me on a sleepless night
i hear the roar of this restless ocean
pounding like thoughts in my head
as the wind drives me back
one step for every two i take
beneath this blood red rise of morning

inimical are these waves
as they lash out against the rocks
unleashing a spray
like a breath in winter's air
exhaled

yet it falls
like a rake against sand
claiming anything in its path
pulling it in then spitting it out
only to build again
like a raged mind
dissilient 

i stand distanced
cowering on the sands
of time
awaiting its calm

June 24 2021

The Shape of water contest
Sponsored by Craig Cornish
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Strand Avatar
September 13, 2021 at 11:06 AM
dissillient- lovely word Sandra
Ashley Avatar
July 24, 2021 at 5:25 PM
Dear Sandra, your imagery is breathtaking. I was swept up in the emotion and metaphorical finesse of your poem. Belated congrats for POTW honors and for your win in Craig's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Cunningham Avatar
July 4, 2021 at 5:15 AM
Congratulations Joseph on POTW. Excellent choice. Tom
Fenn Avatar
July 2, 2021 at 12:56 PM
What a beautiful ocean poem! Congrats on poem of the week, and on your contest win!
Alex Avatar
July 2, 2021 at 12:41 AM
inimical are these waves Beautiful. Congratulations!
Radice Avatar
June 30, 2021 at 9:26 AM
Outstanding Sandra. A really great read. Cheers - Gary
Mcintosh Avatar
June 30, 2021 at 8:14 AM
Congrats on POTW with this amazing write. I love it... again and am so glad to see you writing and posting here. Love to you and God bless you too, Gina
Green Avatar
June 29, 2021 at 3:28 PM
Hey there my friend. Congrats on POTW and it seems won the contest too. Just goes to prove someone around here has very good taste in poetry. Happy to see you here Sandy.
Pandit Avatar
June 29, 2021 at 10:52 AM
Back with congrats Sandy on poem of the week. Enjoy the spotlight.
Goldsmith Avatar
June 28, 2021 at 8:30 AM
Back with congratulations on this POTW win. A "Beautiful" write. Enjoy this win with blessings and hugs.......................
Agustin Avatar
June 28, 2021 at 6:20 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing your talent... with this as a proof. God bless you.
Nicole Avatar
June 27, 2021 at 6:31 PM
Thoughts are like waves, pulling you in and then pushing you away. "the wind drives me back" Yes, it will, my dear friend. This is beautiful in so many amazing ways. Congratulations Sandra, on Poem of the Week. :) Brandy
Edmonds  Avatar
June 27, 2021 at 1:07 PM
Back with congratulations on poem of the week, a well deserved honour… Belle
Adams Avatar
June 27, 2021 at 4:28 PM
Thank you so much for your kind words and visit! hugs
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 27, 2021 at 12:29 PM
I just commented on this wonderful poem yesterday yet my comment is not here nor is it in my outbox. Very strange! I said I thought this poem was brilliant and I am so happy to see that it was honored with Poem of the week! Congratulations Sandra. Also Congratulations on your top win. Blessings xxoo
Adams Avatar
June 27, 2021 at 4:26 PM
Thank you my dear friend, i saw your comment yesterday but did not have time to comment on all the replies, i can't find it either and find that strange as well... glad you stopped by again and thank you for all of your kind words both yesterday and today... hope all is well in your corner of the world... hugs and blessings XoXo
La France Avatar
June 27, 2021 at 6:48 AM
Sandra, beautiful and congratulations on receiving POEM OF THE WEEK, enjoy the honor, love _Constance
Adams Avatar
June 27, 2021 at 4:30 PM
Thank you so much Constance, my muse is coming back in little snippets, hope to make one of your contests very soon, hugs and blessings :)
Balasubramanian Avatar
June 27, 2021 at 6:23 AM
My comments disappeared two times. Congratulations on Potw honour and win. Enjoy the honour and your day.
Adams Avatar
June 27, 2021 at 4:31 PM
I see one of your comments, but do recall seeing two the other day, someone else's reply vanished as well... thank you for the repeat visit and kind words! hugs and blessings
Cunningham Avatar
June 27, 2021 at 1:16 AM
Back with congratulations Sandra, on POTW, enjoy the honour. Tom
Adams Avatar
June 27, 2021 at 4:32 PM
Thank you so much Tom...i had no idea until i got on and saw all these replies! Hugs and blessings!
Theraven Avatar
June 26, 2021 at 3:03 PM
Sandra, Came from curiousity of a contest blog., stayed for a wonderfully creative entry. Congratulations Sandra. Best wishes for you this week-end. -Richard
Adams Avatar
June 27, 2021 at 4:32 PM
Thank you so much for your kind words Richard, good to hear from you... hugs and blessings!
Rose  Avatar
June 26, 2021 at 2:22 PM
Well penned dear Sandra, every word well placed, congrats on your 1st place win :)
Adams Avatar
June 27, 2021 at 4:33 PM
Thank you so very much Mystic Rose... hugs and blessings
Goldsmith Avatar
June 26, 2021 at 11:06 AM
Back with congratulations on this win. A "Beautiful" write. Love It. Enjoy your win with blessings.......................
Adams Avatar
June 27, 2021 at 4:33 PM
Thank you so very much Paula... hugs and blessings
Mcintosh Avatar
June 26, 2021 at 10:52 AM
Back with congrats dear friend. I'm so glad this wonderful poem won the contest :) God bless you and Congrats to you, Love, Gina
Adams Avatar
June 27, 2021 at 4:34 PM
Thank you so much Gina for the visit and kind words... hugs and blessings!
Daniel Avatar
June 26, 2021 at 2:39 AM
Mind blowing, Sandra, congratulations :)
Adams Avatar
June 27, 2021 at 4:34 PM
Thank you so very much Jo... hugs
Seeker Avatar
June 25, 2021 at 8:37 PM
Brilliantly penned Sandra! Congrats on your top win!
Adams Avatar
June 27, 2021 at 4:35 PM
Thank you so much unseeking for your visit and kind words, hugs
Edmonds  Avatar
June 25, 2021 at 3:22 PM
Beautiful poetry Sandra, congratulations on your win… Belle
Adams Avatar
June 27, 2021 at 4:35 PM
Thank you again Belle , hugs and blessings
Andresen Avatar
June 25, 2021 at 2:14 PM
- A poem that deserved its top first place, congratulations Sandra :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Adams Avatar
June 27, 2021 at 4:36 PM
wow thank you Anne-Lise for you kind words, my muse has been hiding for several months... hope all is well with you .. hugs and blessings
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