thriveni c mysore Poet Haiku

shaped haiku

rows of autumn trees
     a vibrant visual treat ~
          quick breeze smells of leaves

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'1'~ '1'~'1'~'1'~'1'~'1' 
'1'~ '1'~'1'~'1'~'1'~'1' 
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Karen Croft July 6, 2026 at 5:03 AM hope you are doing well and will soon be back on the soup!

Darlene De Beaulieu September 11, 2025 at 3:38 PM Hello Thirveni C Mysore, I likke tis shape haiku. I read it and now it will be my fav. /Darlene

Victor Buhagiar August 26, 2025 at 1:53 AM A creative vision of autumn. Congratulations or your win.

Malabika Ray Choudhury July 26, 2025 at 3:16 PM Congratulations on your win, Dear Thriveni. Shaped Haiku is an interesting challenge, and yours is so creative! thriveni c mysore July 27, 2025 at 6:49 AM Thank you so much dear poet, your kind visit and words means so much to me. Thank you.

Valsa George July 17, 2025 at 10:12 PM Beautiful haiku with an impressive visual creation. Congratulations Thriveni on your win. thriveni c mysore July 18, 2025 at 7:17 AM Oh thank you for your kind words of encouragement dear friend, This is my first try in shaped haiku. Thank you so much for your visit. Thank you.

Sara Kendrick July 17, 2025 at 8:24 AM Creative work that you have penned in this one. Way to go with this winner. Sara K thriveni c mysore July 17, 2025 at 8:16 PM Thank you for your time and words dear friend. I appreciate your kind support. thank you.

Howard Kerr July 17, 2025 at 4:46 AM Thriveni, Warm words of congratulations to you on your triumph in the contest Your skills in the area of compelling narrative and visual design are admirable. Thanks for your email regarding my entry Howard thriveni c mysore July 17, 2025 at 7:04 AM Thank you for your kind visit and words. I am so filled with joy by your appreciation. thank you for coloring my day dear poet. thank you.

Krishnanand Guptar July 16, 2025 at 11:15 PM Congratulations Triveni on your win in this contest with a lovely write on autumn trees. Wishing you a cheerful day. thriveni c mysore July 17, 2025 at 7:03 AM Thank you so much for your kind words and visit dear poet. Means so much to me. Thank you.

Anisha Dutta July 16, 2025 at 10:33 PM Congrats to win. Blessings thriveni c mysore July 17, 2025 at 7:02 AM Thank you so much for your kind visit and words dear poet. Thank you for the blessings. Cheers!

Andrea Dietrich July 16, 2025 at 11:26 AM Congrats on your win, thriveni. thriveni c mysore July 16, 2025 at 8:04 PM Your kind visit and words means so much to me dear poet. Thank you so much. cheers!

Trina Layne July 16, 2025 at 7:14 AM Congratulations! These shapes take a lot of patience and insight. thriveni c mysore July 16, 2025 at 8:02 PM Shape poems are interesting for me as well dear friend. Thank you so much for your kind visit and sweet words. Thank you.