Shape Shifter

It’s the circle of a trickle sliced from snow
at the mountain’s very top.
Widening and lengthening, it gushes and grows,
and at the steepest slopes it rushes - cascading
as a froth of diamonds
sparkling in sunlight.

Splitting where big boulders sit,
it splashes on its drifting way.
Shifting - ever shifting - it tumbles
over countless stones and gravel
or meanders with susurration until at last,
it is a river.

Broad or narrow; shallow or deep,
it can be tempestuous at times,
while other times
it’s as placid as
patches of mellow moonlight spilled from sky.
At last it flows to where, estuarine,
it melds with the destiny of other river shifters -
Oceanic.

June 23, 2021
for The Shape Of Water Poetry Contest 
Now for  'A Brian Strand July 2' Poetry Contest
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Allison Avatar
July 2, 2021 at 5:40 PM
fabulous imagery and description Andrea, many congrats on your win:-)
Kauffman Avatar
July 2, 2021 at 9:59 AM
Thought I had commented on this wonderful poem before! The shape shifters are at it again! What a wonderful take on the theme Andrea - shape shifter. Very perceptive as you take the theme from one phase to another. So many wonderful images that splash, rush, gush and cascade like clear water. Congratulations on your win my friend.
Boreham Avatar
July 2, 2021 at 8:33 AM
Wonderful flow, Congratulations on your win :)
Alex Avatar
July 2, 2021 at 7:53 AM
Knocking at your doors again to congratulate you. Congratulations!
Goldsmith Avatar
June 28, 2021 at 9:22 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful story/write from snow to river. Enjoy your win with blessings.................
Norton Avatar
June 26, 2021 at 4:54 PM
I love this poem about how rivers are born and eventually, run to the ocean. I love the detail. Makes me want to explore the mountains and rivers today. Excellent poem, Andrea!
Brewer Avatar
June 26, 2021 at 8:41 AM
A beautiful word moving picture of the many ages of a river. Skilfully done, Andrea.
May Avatar
June 25, 2021 at 12:50 PM
The many moods of water, Wonderful write Andrea..
Romios Avatar
June 25, 2021 at 8:40 AM
Best wishes for an excekker poem. Pangie xx
Jayasankar Avatar
June 25, 2021 at 7:29 AM
This is so lovely with great imagery my friend... "Cascading as a froth of diamonds sparkling in sunlight.. "... so beautiful... just got some time to read your poems... Hugs.. ~ Ani
Seeker Avatar
June 24, 2021 at 10:10 PM
Wow! So artistically portrayed! Now let me look up the words, estuarine & susurration :) good luck for the contest!
Proxenos Avatar
June 23, 2021 at 2:05 PM
Such a creative talented write Andrea, Kudos my friend. Your imagery totally unique! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Balasubramanian Avatar
June 23, 2021 at 11:53 AM
Great imagery. A refreshingly different and awesome take on contest theme. All the best.
Milgate Avatar
June 23, 2021 at 11:52 AM
Just love this, loved the words you used, had to look up one or two!! Just excellent.
Cunningham Avatar
June 23, 2021 at 11:51 AM
You covered the journey of the snow caps to the ocean well Andrea, i could picture it in my mind. Tom
Buhagiar Avatar
June 23, 2021 at 7:44 AM
Is this for a contest? Great idea. a bounder of snow rolling down to the river. Great imagination.
Theraven Avatar
June 23, 2021 at 7:24 AM
Andrea, Your poem is so inviting. Makes me jealous of those born under the water sign. 'Broad or narrow; shallow or deep, ~ it can be tempestuous at times, ~ while other times ~ it’s as placid as ~ patches of mellow moonlight spilled from sky.' Two thirds of the Earth applaud this. -Richard
Alex Avatar
June 23, 2021 at 7:10 AM
Beautiful imagination and execution. As usual from a great poet.
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