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Poetic Form: Sonnet

Inspired: 2023 December 03

Image: Small Wild Goose Pagoda by Britannica

Small Wild Goose Pagoda, the Big Wild Goose Pagoda’s younger sister

KJV: Isaiah 2:4, " ... they shall beat their swords into plowshares, and their spears into pruninghooks:" ... by Isaiah son of Amoz re last days of Judah & Jerusalem Insomuch, the northern rains be as brief, and the winds tear the southern plains relief, sobeit, that the realm is the victim, and the seas rise as victor; its dictum, praise be not the state claim of righteous earned, challenge naught by singularity spurned, howbeit, by a greater force yon ours, deliver its wrath on the land it scars, then sheath the swords of heartless warriors, in their mildness find besprent carriers, and restore the misty dew dawn's embrace, while tethering the plains a moistures grace, and hail the dutious guards their former posts, and the forces that be, as the realms host's.

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Date: 12/4/2023 3:58:00 PM
Excellent sonnet, William, my favorite form of poetry. Well written and scripturally sound, my friend. A FAV for my list. Smiles ~ Blessings from your poet friend in Texas, Bill Aloha
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Date: 12/5/2023 1:46:00 AM
Yes, Bill, as Isaiah's words spoke of such a blessed intervention how we will humble ourselves, my friend. You are a welcomed blessing, Bill. Aloha, William
Date: 12/4/2023 2:04:00 PM
William, your sonnet is a remarkable manifestation of profound philosophical thought. It delves into the intricate connection between climate change and human behavior, revealing the dilemma we face as the seas' dictum threatens to bring utter devastation upon our planet.
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Date: 12/5/2023 1:37:00 AM
Yes, as our crowded world accommodate modern technology and vice versa, there's always an opposite energy that get's into the mix, Lassad. Mayhaps, a blessed intervention, like your thoughtful caring share eh. Aloha, William

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