Shampoo and Soap

  
    If shampoo and soap 
      could wash away
    the sins I may commit today

    I’d stand for hours
      beneath a shower
    Anything so as not to pray
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Patterson Avatar
September 15, 2025 at 11:00 AM
Love this.
Velasco Avatar
September 11, 2025 at 7:23 PM
Clever and relatable—love the humor and honesty in it!
Wolf Avatar
September 11, 2025 at 7:25 PM
Thanks, Rowena. I was hoping someone world feel like you do about this one. ~ Gershon
Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 11, 2025 at 4:49 PM
I suppose we all look for the 'easy' way...wash, rinse, repeat is what the ego wants not humility and prayer. Good one, Gershon.
Wolf Avatar
September 11, 2025 at 6:46 PM
Nicely commented on there, Sara. Nicely commented on there, Sara. Nicely commented on there, Sara...
Godwin Avatar
September 11, 2025 at 7:40 AM
Wow and How, and Now I say Holy cow. It isn't my norm to form no reaction as I have not formed now. Perhaps, if I had a cleanser, a Wow rinser, I might find my thoughts in a bind beneath the Wow that is all my mind has Now. CayCay at play, drive slowly
Wolf Avatar
September 11, 2025 at 6:46 PM
And I shall reply, "Bow-wow!' ~ Man's BFF
DiMino Avatar
September 11, 2025 at 6:39 AM
Wash away prayer as well -- difficult to be humble, for ego to bow before anything...even God. When will we learn?!
Wolf Avatar
September 11, 2025 at 6:47 PM
When we're so old that even our egos have faded away.
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