Shampoo and Soap

  
    If shampoo and soap 
      could wash away
    the sins I may commit today

    I’d stand for hours
      beneath a shower
    Anything so as not to pray

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Date: 9/11/2025 7:23:00 PM
Clever and relatable—love the humor and honesty in it!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/11/2025 7:25:00 PM
Thanks, Rowena. I was hoping someone world feel like you do about this one. ~ Gershon
Date: 9/11/2025 4:49:00 PM
I suppose we all look for the 'easy' way...wash, rinse, repeat is what the ego wants not humility and prayer. Good one, Gershon.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/11/2025 6:46:00 PM
Nicely commented on there, Sara. Nicely commented on there, Sara. Nicely commented on there, Sara...
Date: 9/11/2025 7:40:00 AM
Wow and How, and Now I say Holy cow. It isn't my norm to form no reaction as I have not formed now. Perhaps, if I had a cleanser, a Wow rinser, I might find my thoughts in a bind beneath the Wow that is all my mind has Now. CayCay at play, drive slowly
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/11/2025 6:46:00 PM
And I shall reply, "Bow-wow!' ~ Man's BFF
Date: 9/11/2025 6:39:00 AM
Wash away prayer as well -- difficult to be humble, for ego to bow before anything...even God. When will we learn?!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/11/2025 6:47:00 PM
When we're so old that even our egos have faded away.
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