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Robert J. Lindley, 5-22-2019
Rhyme, ( In Poetry, The Whimsical Wind That Speaks)
 
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After reading a couple dozen of my older poems written in the mid 70's, I sat down and composed this poem today.
I hope that you may enjoy reading it and knowing that life is so very much deeper than we mortals ever realize.
And it usually holds so very much more promise than we ever allow our hearts to ever seek.
Fortunate is the person that finds that out before going through that last dark door, IMHO..
Shall We Dare To Venture Forth To Consult The Stone Whimsical wind that bloweth upon a cold stone knoweth men are lost, ill consoled when left alone yet upon resplendent dawn's great promise one finds hope's first waiting of truth, relief of tormented minds Alas! Now such winds whimper and refuse to reign adding to epic tragedy and mortal bane! Yet in the midst of a gentle Spring storm raining Nature can and does send hope without explaining its constant bounty nor its most blessed reprieves from humanity's woes and mortal death that grieves deeply shattered hearts, the ruin of such tragic souls or Fate and its mysterious accursed goals! Shall we dare to venture forth to consult the stone ask it about death, sense of loss when we are gone demand answers, it has gathered from wayward winds or beg more knowledge of what our future portends Nay! Such folly, we know it would surely dismiss asking us instead, did princess blush, her first kiss? Whimsical wind that bloweth upon a cold stone knoweth men are lost, ill consoled when left alone yet upon resplendent dawn's great promise one finds hope's first waiting of truth, relief of tormented minds Alas! Now such winds whimper and refuse to reign adding to epic tragedy and mortal bane! Robert J. Lindley, 5-22-2019 Rhyme, ( In Poetry, The Whimsical Wind That Speaks)

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Date: 5/23/2019 8:06:00 PM
When man is left alone he will find someone to confide in even if it may be a cold stone. Beautifully expressed Robert. Have a great night! : ) xxoo
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Robert Lindley
Date: 5/24/2019 4:09:00 PM
Thank you my dear friend. Sometimes even a cold stone can be an inspiration to a wandering old poet..
Date: 5/23/2019 9:27:00 AM
Epic, windy, whimsical. It's great, Robert.
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Robert Lindley
Date: 5/23/2019 1:03:00 PM
Thank you my friend. Your comment gives me hope that this one has some merit...
Date: 5/22/2019 11:33:00 PM
Deep, gloomy and very compelling; a very fine work of dire insights.
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Robert Lindley
Date: 5/23/2019 1:01:00 PM
Thank you my friend. I begged my muse to let me toss it and tart over- she laughed and said,- no way, you must bear the weight of that which you write-- be it good or bad..

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