Shall I Leave

Shall I leave? the wounded me, the enchanted me?
And this handled heart with a chain of curses 
Shall I take it with me?
For better dead than held within a skinny love
Seeking another land was a hope 
But then turned to be my favorite nightmare
The other land would be green 
But its where the roots have died and taken off
Its where no shelter has been set for the cold
Where the lights have never been turned on
For better unseen than tortured by your stormy eyes
Shall I soothe your solid life and be the abandoned one ?
Just as your cravings are for the departure of me
I could be the stone that you can throw it into the well of sighs
For better unheard than muddling your balanced sea
So shall I leave before darkness perches upon your lonely heart
I could be wherever your longing me to be
For better my name  faded and better you freed
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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August 17, 2015 at 2:31 PM
WOW, Dima, now I see the poem. Deep and ends well, it's a good ending, fading yet free... SKAT
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August 18, 2015 at 2:36 AM
Glad u liked it :)
A  Avatar
August 16, 2015 at 9:24 PM
Hi Dima, welcome to poetry soup. Looking forrward in reading your future poems. SKAT
Najjar Avatar
August 17, 2015 at 12:42 AM
Thank you :)
A   Avatar
August 16, 2015 at 2:36 PM
Dima, the poem is missing... However, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
Najjar Avatar
August 17, 2015 at 1:04 AM
Now I got it ! i thought you read it ! hehe dont know what was the problem !
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August 17, 2015 at 12:42 AM
Thank you Linda for reading it, I appreciate your feedback :)
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