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The last days and the bright sunshine setting You can see the stars in fading sunlight. When the sun fades, moonlight lever shining. Not as mates, more as buddies we're waiting. Not just cautious buddies or close friends sight. The last days and the bright sunshine setting Wildlife takes time and quaint is quieting. Birds nest in treetops as cascade the night. When the sun fades, moonlight lever shining. Don't miss this time; on my shoulder leaning. Autumn leaves turn auburn and frost soon bright. Ending day and glaring sun are setting. Stick together like a blade storm darling. When the moon moves, the sunlight remains white. When the sun fades, moonlight lever shining. Laugh when you write about river bending. You and I in each other's eyes peering. The last days and the bright sunshine setting. When the sun fades, moonlight lever shining.
Written: July 11, 2022

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Date: 7/15/2022 8:48:00 AM
Oh so sweet Lasaad! Love the picture you've painted here. Linda
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Date: 7/12/2022 8:13:00 AM
Beautiful Villanelle, Lasaad. The imagery is magnificent. The romance of sharing the changes in life towards the end are touching. Thanks for sharing through your poetry my friend. Bill
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Date: 7/12/2022 5:56:00 AM
A touch of romance--great imagery, Lasaad.
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Date: 7/12/2022 4:56:00 AM
A delightful poem that creates a plethora of imagery that leads to an explosion of beauty, my dearest friend, Lasaad! Blessings!
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