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Shake My Soul

Shake my soul Drained of life busy and monotonous, I always sit in silence to introspect, Why the need to exhaust ourselves? When nothing so essential than comfort, And happiness of content beyond this rat race, Stands quietly at the door and deep into heart. But for only one peek into our mortal being, That will shake the stem to shed dry leaves of greed, Nurture few unblossomed buds that didn't see an early spring, to bloom in kindness. As I sit in solitude tired and absolutely broken, Denied of love having lost all wit, Cherishing material joys, in false pride and ego, Will someone dare give me a good shake? Shhhhhh....... Don't wake up my soul....... Written August 10th, 2015 Contest- Shhhh Sponsor - Silent one

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Date: 8/10/2015 9:19:00 PM
Nice write Upma....I worked as a therapist for years...helping others while my life went bad....now retired and living in the tropics...life is so much better for this "wounded healer"...Peter NB Thanks for the comment!
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Date: 8/10/2015 9:01:00 AM
Sitting in silence is good! I am reading your fresh new poem early Monday morning and enjoying it. My best to you in the contest. Your friend in poetry, ~~~Darlene
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Date: 8/10/2015 7:04:00 AM
Perfect entry for the contest Dr. Upma and no, I won't DARE give you a shake...Your sleeping soul is creating some wonderful poetry...
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Date: 8/10/2015 6:44:00 AM
Upma, truly wonderful for the contest 7 and thanks for visiting all my winning poems today, so appreciated
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